Reviews for The Most Opportune Lighting Bolt

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whitewave16 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseThis was funny! What happened to Maedhros though?
Kivessa1 2004-04-11 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant. I love your stories.
Ren 2004-03-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseLOL! This is insane. This is the parodiest (whoowhoo! look! new word!) parody I've ever read. Love it!
Princess of Dol Amroth 2003-10-25 ch 1,	abuseAmazing! Just like I imagined it! Your writing syle is beautiful, and its very engaging. It's almost like your THERE you describe it so well. Expect more reviews from me beacause i'm going to check out your other stories. Tommorow or later today or yawns whatever it is...yawns again yeppers it's late. looks at clock Hey! it's mocking me I tell you! It's saying it 7:29, and I haven't goten a wink of sleep, and I have to get up and around in two hours! Wait clocks can't talk... I'm seeing things... i'll just end this here... Namaarie, (A very crazy and sleep needing...) ~Princess
Furry Banana 2003-01-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseTall and breathtaking. My thoughts exactly.
Klose 2003-01-26 ch 1,	abuseMy god, you have no idea how hard I was laughing! This is simply hilarious! Where did you come up with the name, Sphagetti? And Huan with Puffo? Priceless!
addicted 2003-01-20 ch 1,	abuseOw rubs butt from falling off chair laughing That was pure brilliance. “I love beautiful women,” So blunt; so painfully forthright!
Hellga 2003-01-09 ch 1,	abuseWhat? No takers for the wonderfully crazy Feanor? And pity Finrod was already spoken for, he would make a wonderful addition to the Sue sisters' collection. Oh, and thanks for leaving Caranthir alone, as he is mine evil grin :hug: Definitely one of the best Mary Sues and Mary Sue parodies I have read :)
Casey Toh 2002-10-26 ch 1,	abuseGosh. I've got a tummy ache now because I laughed too much. A great Mary Sues fic! :D
Lindelea 2002-10-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was just beautiful--one of the funniest things I've read in quite a while. But poor Vaire--I guess being a weaver isn't quite as exciting to her husband as a real true Mary Sue. I loved the addition of Huan. Great job--can we have a sequal? What exactly happens with Gil-galad and Glorfindel? ("I love beautiful women"!)
Soledad 2002-10-23 ch 1,	abuseDear heavens, that was hilarious! Sil-based Sues are so rare and your names are really killers. Spaghetti - how did you come up with that one? But what nearly finished me were the pink roses growing at the entrance of the Halls. :))
Kazaera 2002-10-23 ch 1,	abuseAiiyeee! I love it, I love it wipes tears from her eyes from laughing hysterically aren't we happy that there is no such thing as a REAL Silm Mary Sue? (yet... oh what a scary thought...) I agree, Maedhros must have been happy for having been forgotten! My personal favorite was "After all, being a dancer was filled with just as much turmoil as participating in the Kinslaying but not in the burning of the ships at Losgar, having his right hand cut off, building a fortress at Himring, forming the Union of Maedhros, being betrayed by treacherous men, participating in another two Kinslayings, stealing a Silmaril, and finally jumping into a fissure containing fire." BRILLIANT!
Finch 2002-10-23 ch 1,	abuseLoL! What a brilliant idea to give Huan his own Doggy-sue! Actually, I think Maedhros may have been greatly relieved when Mary fell for Mandos...
Ivanneth 2002-10-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseHooray for Puffo! Oh, I am exceedingly diverted. Rose and tea-cakes, indeed! Those Sues are wonderful. ("After all, not only was Susan on the cover of every magazine, but she was also active in environment actions. Her current project was to stop people from cutting down trees.") Poor Maedhros, alone and forgotten... still chortling
kyesophina 2002-10-23 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. Haha, very original, for either a Mary Sue or a Mary Sue parody! Wonderful job. Probably the funniest line for me was your last comment. Keep up the good work!

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