Reviews for The secrets of her past

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JPandS 2004-03-19 ch 4,	abuseThat was a great chapter. the story is really good so far! Please update soon and keep up the good work! Bye! ^^
Codie 2004-01-29 ch 4,	abuseWaiting for the next chapter..I'm not leaving till you put it up...nope not leaving. alright I'm leaving but I'll be back and there better be a new chapter when I get back.
Transcendent 2004-01-07 ch 4, anon.	abuseWoke up in the morning, cleaned my room, had breakfast, did my hair, and got on the internet. All very routine. Hopped on AIM and got on FFnet...clicked 'Misc' and then 'Sailor Moon Crossovers'. Scroll down a few and what do I see? A cliché sounding fic. What do I do? I read it. What do I find? . BULL . GOOD LORD PEOPLE. How can you make one story SO bad? There are EASY things you can do to IMRPOVE your writing. What are they? SPELL CHECK. It's not that hard to do! Open 'Microsoft Word' and it spell checks AND grammar checks and you don't even have to press a single button. JUST COPY AND PASTE WHAT YOU'VE WROTE INTO IT AND YOU'RE BASICALLY DONE. After that you just correct what it underlines. HOW CAN THAT BE SO HARD? For your grammar...USE WORD. You can also get a trusty beta-reader who knows their English (commas, periods, question marks, quotation marks, proper tenses, etc). If you can't find one (which is hardly understandable) ask someone to volunteer. So do you all understand? Probably not. SIMPLE VERSION: BAD GRAMMAR AND POOR SPELLING GET FLAMES. From who?
StarDustGal 2003-09-26 ch 3,	abusei'm reviewing this chapter 'cause i already reviewed chapter 4. just telling you PLEASE UPDATE LIKE UH NOW!
StarDustGal 2003-09-13 ch 4,	abusethis is so good! whats gunna happen?? Makoto is gunna kick but right...right!! -SDG
Kolinshar Benito 2003-07-15 ch 4,	abuseWow! Do you know how rare it is to find SF/SM crossovers now a days? ^_^! I'm throughly impressed with your story! I'm definately looking forward to your updates!
Monou Hakkai 2003-07-14 ch 4,	abuseVega as Rose's student. o.O Hmm that's something different. Glad you put Chun-Li in this. She is one of the best females in the game. I'm curious to know why she's looking for Vega. Hmm... Oh you put Sakura and Kei in this. Wow that's nice no really I used to play as her a lot as I did with Ryu and Ken but I only played the Streetfighter EX game, which was not very fun considering how weird the characters were in 3d. I really do want to see Makoto meet Ryu again ^^. I did learn Shotokan Karate but didn't learn any techniques like the Fireball (Hadoken) or even a hurricane kick -.- A pity. Anyway liked the chapter and am curious to see how the tournament will turn out for all the fighters.
Lizzie-chan 2003-07-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseThanks for the update! You mentioned Chun-Li and that's cool! She's a god fighter better than Kammy!
Broken Gem 2003-07-11 ch 4,	abuseHey GofD, What's up? Just read your story and it's great. I love your work. It's nice to see a Street Fighter crossover staring Makoto. And I love te pairng. Mako-can and Ryu. Hehehe can't wait for an update. Ja ne
mystlady 2003-07-11 ch 4,	abuseYou rock girl, you mentioned Chun li!! She's my fave next to Ryu! Thanks for the update and I havent read Mako centrics in a while! This section is really starting to bug me alot with Usagi centrics. Long time no see. Email me sometimes kay?
Jovianokamigirl 2003-07-11 ch 4,	abuseHey dark-chan! I just read chapter 4 and I love it! it funny how you have Keiki and Ken fight each other. Will I send you an e-mail and I want to ask if you will send what you have of the YYH/SM fics. Later firey
I hate fucking Usagi 2003-06-19 ch 3,	abuseHey, this is great! SF and SM are so rare these days... Great story and idea... Hopefully, she can find her questions about her missing mother...
Higurete Michi Toushi 2003-05-17 ch 3,	abuseWhe! Finally an update! :):) huggles girl of darkness Thank you so much! And thanks for reviewing my story, my insanely bizarre mad creation! And anyways, you asked about Billy Bob... I have no clue how the people in yuor school know him! ^^* I just thought it was a funny name! Billy bob! Heehee! Anyways, then... Hope that answerd your question, rvrn though I haven't got a clue who this Billy Bob character is... ^^* By the way, great chapter! I look forward to reading more of this! Keep up the wonderful work on this story! (Although I still say your chapters could be longer... My opinion, gomen, pay no mind to it... ^^*) Hugzz! Jovian Angel
Thunder-Goddess-905 2003-05-17 ch 3,	abusehey i'am glad that more people are starting to write Makoto centered fics and yours is coming out so good plz update chp 4 soon keep up the good work :)
Monou Hakkai 2003-05-15 ch 3,	abuseOh you decided to change it, eh? Oh well it doesn't affect the entire plot in general. Some grammar mistakes popped up here and there but they weren't dangerous enough to destory the chapter completely. The Streetfighter Alpha movie is so good. I've watched it a lot on my DVD. Do you know that it's very uncommon for anyone to do a crossover like this and focusing it on Makoto? She's the Karate girl after all. You know i always had the impression that Ryu could have been her Sempai ^_^. After all they both train in Karate but I'm unsure of Makoto's Karate style - there are numerous types as you can imagine. Ryu I definitely know is Shotokan (I did train in Shotokan Karate for a few years ^^;;). I'm glad you're doing this coupling because it has crossed my mind a few times but my knowledge on the Streetfighter games as a whole is too limited. But Makoto and Ryu interacting has lots of possibilities so I suggest you continue this story. Ken and Ryu's friendship was in character and it's not surprising on how Ken reacted around a girl. He was a bit of a flirt ^^;; After all he was younger at this time and it was before he married Eliza and started a family with her.

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