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Reviews for: The Time Constraints of Forever
Miss Danax
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
Simply wonderful; brilliant.
Hikarisakurariver
2003-10-14 . chapter 1
*in tears* that . was. so . beautiful...
The Fire-breathing-ferret
2003-08-18 . chapter 1
Thats so sad *sniff* I think im going to cry...
Tharin
2003-03-31 . chapter 1
A good, but very sad story. You characterize them both very well.
Poor Harry, but I'm always optimistic and want to believe that there is a chance for him and Libby after "Endgame".
Lunatique
2002-12-08 . chapter 1
Lovely story. I'm a Kim fangirl myself, and I share the obsession. :) Incidentally, I, too, have always wondered if the mentioned-only-by-name Danny Byrd wouldn't hook up with his best friend's girl. This version of events makes it really believable, and heartbreaking.
CJSpooks
2002-11-07 . chapter 1
Aw...great story...it fed my Harry obsession. Great job...I'm gonna cry now...
Jaina Solo2
2002-10-25 . chapter 1
I really liked your story but I was just wondering what the inscription in the ring meant
Dusha
2002-10-24 . chapter 1
I know it may not be totally kosher to review your own story, but someone asked what Ex astris, amor meant. Since it is the 'puch line' I thought people might want to know. Basically it means, in latin, 'From the stars, love'. This is also a play off of the Starfleet Academy credo of 'Ex astris, sciencia', which means 'From the stars, knowledge.' Hopefully this helps!
JadziaKathryn
2002-10-24 . chapter 1
Hmm, I haven't got a clue what "ex astris, amor" means, but that's really the only "improvement" comment I can make. I think you've done a nice job...tragically ironic, that he was so excited, for this.
Hailey Russell
2002-10-23 . chapter 1
Wow! This is a great story. I could feel Libby's and Harry's pain. Their emotions are well-written. If you like Harry, read my story "Seismic Kisses".
Stella McCoy
2002-10-23 . chapter 1
Alas, I get another credit! *grins* And an entire paragraph that no one else will get! One thing, though. Where the heck did you get that title? It's weird, but it fits...in a weird way. And you finally took most of the focus in the latter half away from icky Janeway! And how many different ways are you going to refer to me? My costume is going to be so much better than yours! And, hehe, I told you I'd give you a super-long review, and I get to be the first! And Riker is one of my love slaves, I just thought I'd state that. And I would say something that might be helpful in improving your writing, but you already know my views on this one. And every other thing you've written/you will write. I just realized that this site needs a little button that would make the review for the author's eyes only, and that way we could avoid the confusion this review will evoke. Well, I'm going to go fantasize about Riker, Phil, Ares, Yur--, um, hehe, how did that get in there...?
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