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Skyheart92
2007-10-04
ch 34,
abuse!
poka
2007-04-29
ch 34,
abuseman u realy have got to update. I thought u said it would be done in may,2004? anyway this story is really exciting can't wait fot the next update
Mysterious Prophetess
2006-06-25
ch 34,
abuseUh, hi, I jsut stumbled across this two years after your last update and beg of you to continue. It's good.
Silver Fantasy
2005-08-11
ch 34,
abuseVery high writing level. Impressive story. Please continue.
evryluvsmisty
2005-03-24
ch 34,
abuseive been waiting for the update to this since the last chapter. i really hope you havent done like all the other good writers and called it quits for pokemon fics.
Hawaiian Potagee
2004-07-28
ch 34,
abusewell its good u updated!
Nightswift
2004-06-24
ch 34, anon.
abuseWhat happened to ash O_o;; he didn't become a pokemon did he? -sweatdrops- update update -whines- it's almost 2 months you fart -bap- ah well,don't update so fast, that way i won't feel guilty for not reading if you don't update ;)
Shockwave1
2004-06-20
ch 34,
abusecome on COME ON you still have time to kill off Ash lol. NM that its way too late, (~_-) I saw that some people were disappointed with me wanting to kill him of respectable. Review: Must say, paragraph 36 is alot like Paragraph 40 of part 1 of my flag story Pokemon Ex. Just check it out. It begins with "Ash went behind a large rock to change..." you'll see the resemblance lol. AND ITS BEEN A WHILE SINCE YOU LAST Put up a nother chapter i can wait... se!. Please update ur story its really good even though ash is still alive. (See you've REALLY improved grammar and stuff. REALLY improved!) I ADDED YOU TO EVERY POSSIBLE CHECK MARK THINGY I COULD LOL!) ok i've spoken!(breath)
Eminamemem
2004-05-19
ch 34,
abusePlease continue, I am just itching to find out what happens next :). I can't wait to read the rest of this story. You are an extremely talented writer!
GoldamonX
2004-05-09
ch 34, anon.
abuseThis was kinda confusing to read but it was pretty good none the less. And don't worry teachers aren't trying to kill you. they just want you to suffer for the last bits of school is all. Update as soon as you can.
Uriel Martin
2004-05-08
ch 34, anon.
abuseGood chapter, not your usual quality, but good all the same since its been so long since your last update. Nice bit of suspense at the end, one question though. How did Ash and Misty get naked, kind of threw me for a loop when Ash went to get their clothes, you never said they took them off to dry and then that would mean...
Etherelemental
2004-05-04
ch 34,
abuseWell, that is quite interesting that no matter how fast you have the story flow that there will still be just as many chapters. ^_^ Anyway, I like how you worked this. This is a nice chapter. And is a welcome relief to all the tense chapters that you've had up lately in this fic. Also, does the Song of Lugia have anything to do with this fic as in how this will end? Or not. Or is it just that you can't tell me because it'd spoil part of the fic? ^_- Anyway, I can't help but wonder what's happened to Ash. Several possibilities are going through my mind, but I can't come up with one that I can expect, because all of them are pretty much just as likely and possible. Anyway, please do try to get another chapter up this month. I really want to know what happens to Ash. ^_^
Bonnie
2004-05-03
ch 34, anon.
abuseWow...took me about 4 days to read this story. Its such a good story I absolutely love it. Great job...My hats off to you thunder mouse pikachu, that is if I wore a hat. Anyways great job I am looking forward to your next update.
gladdecease
2004-05-02
ch 34,
abuseWhat happened? Why did Ash take so long? Earlier, did Misty se a memory of a sort from Ash's past? If so, what was his dad talking about when he gave Ash that box? What was in it? Why was it a heirloom? Is Ash part Pokémon? Why was he able to talk with Pikachu telepathecally? How does he know that Pokégods? Why were they lecturing him? Wh... *gladdecease moans, holds her head in her hands* Oh...I have too many questions right now...answer them ASAP, kay? By the by, good job.
Joy-girl
2004-04-30
ch 34,
abuseMush... pure mush =P But that's alright. HOpe the next chapter is longer (and sooner... not that I'm one to talk)What's Ash doing? Or, what isn't he doing? *gasp* he's not cheating on her, is he?! No... that's too cliche. Probably some special pwoer of somesort, right? Well, guess I'll just have to wait and see ^_~
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