I feel sad that it has been three years since this chapter. I look forward to the next/last chapter, if you decide that you want to complete this.

I enjoyed the way you modeled Jareth, with him being extremely close to what I figure his personality to be.

In any case, I'll just have to wait.

..signed with maramalade..

I like it. Nice plot and good characterization. :) So, I know in the A/N you said you would finish it, but it's been years. I hope you're still planning on ending it. haha I was sort of startled getting to the climax, and then bang!... no more chapters :(

This looks fresh and interesting--I will come back for more later...I'm supposed to be in bed right now...just wanted to say, thanks for not making Jareth sappy but retaining his inherent cruelty and Sarah's delicate inner-self and spoiled nature. We all want her to grow out of that, and she has good qualities, but pretending it was never there is a lie so many people write, as well as, like you said, making Karen evil and/or she and Sarah suddenly perfectly get along after Sarah's Labby visit.

I have to disagree with Sarah: The Ring was a lot scarier in English. Probably because the special effects in Ringu were just... a little bad. Or maybe because I watched Ringu in Japanese class with a ton of chattering teenagers.

I love it so far; though I admit I went to one of the later chapters to find out if this was actually a J/S romance. *looks sheepish* I didn't want to stop reading, but I am very picky about pairings.

So yeah, I love the way you write Jareth-- and though I often have a hard time reading endlessly about the daily attire of Jareth, King of Goblins and connosieur of poet shirts and spandex, you make it interesting, and you dont babble on about his clothes needlessly. Kudos to you!

I think you're a really good writer. I can't wait to finish what's up so far... keep it up!

Happy Writing,
GC

More please.

Oh, the twist is wonderful! Really, really wonderful! Please, I beg of you, just finish this chapeter, and I'll be happy.

I'm sorry to see, that you have abandoned this story. It had potential and you took the easy way out.

OH NO! please please please! you must fininsh this story. it's amazing! your writing is wondeful the way you've written the characters is wonderful!
"what is it that you want,Jareth?"
well what is it? PLEASE!

Hello! I know that you are no longer interested in this story, however please just submit the last chapter. It's quite painful to read a whole story and then be left hanging right before the completion. So, please, if you can, finish the story.

Hi, LunarWolf!

Please, bear with me here.. There's this funny story... I sat at my desk, pulling an all-nighter cause I have an exam and I wanted to also read some fanfic (cause I'm a bit confident in my material... a bit being the key word). Anyways, I found this fanfic that was really interesting and I sat through reading it, finding it more and more familiar as I went along. Eventually, I realized that it was certain that I've read it before; yours, to be exact ^^; I just never left a review. I'm surprised that such a well laid out story, great writing style, and increasingly addicting plot didn't remain stuck in my mind. So I had to read it all in one sitting to figure out the ending-- Ah hah! That's right, it never did end. ^-^;

I'm not mean, I'm not pushy.. I'm blunt, unfortunately. I have a problem of insulting everyone even with my compliments. I realized that something dreadful could have happened to this author, because you've mentioned you had a clear idea of the ending and leave us at this dreadful cliffhanger; so I worried a bit. A few clicks of the mouse later and your homepage led to your livejournal and I'm relieved to see you're alive and, I hope, doing well ^^;

So what I'm basically trying to point out at the end, and I hope you receive this review, is that any ending is worthwhile to finishing this fanfiction. I realize you've worked on it long, probably failed to see any motivation in finishing it, but yet you stopped at /the very last chapter/. For the sake of feeling accomplished, I was hoping you'd put out an ending to it soon. I really enjoyed it, and I really wished to know what would happen. Even if the only thing capable to be written is: Jareth drops everything, kisses Sarah passionately, they marry and live happily ever after and have spawn running around.
It's some form of conclusion ^-^ It's a bit cruel to leave fans (yes, fanfic authors have fans) left in the dark for so long. It's one thing dropping a fic halfway than dropping it at such a cruel cliffhanger and the notibly last chapter.

No, I won't loose sleep over it. No, I won't bother, demand, and ultimately stalk you through livejournal (which is where your homepage leads to ^~ ), and all the like. Hopefully ^~ Heck, I'm sure I'm creative enough to imagine how it'd end, but really it's not the same. ^^; I'm sorry if I come off as rude. I understand 100% if there's no interest into it, I just wish to pitch my two cents. As an author, you have a remarkable talent, and I hope you use it more than fanfiction, as it could lead somewhere. It's hard to find authors that can provoke emotions into their readers. Take this as an ego boost from someone that really really enjoyed your creative work here and wishes to know your conclusion.

From a diligent fanfiction reader, a friend, and fellow writer (on her good days),

Paola/Draco

Please,

Please... finish this story...

Thank you...

Anna

I'll try not to be too annoying since it's been a while since you've last updated. But I would really like to see how your Labyrinth story ends since I have followed it for quite a while.

I know you're REALLY busy probably but I would just like to see how everything turns out. I'm not going to demand that you finish ASAP. Just whenever you have spare time--if you have any that is.

I've loved this story on the other hand. I've loved the way you've written Sarah. I've been able to connect with her. ^^ You've done an excellent job.

I have just sat and read all of your story, its great! But that can't be the ending can it? Please write another chapter to finish it off!

From the POV of someone who's had much experience but not a lot of bf/gf experience it's interesting to read about someone who has such an awkward time with love. I like the way Sarah is written because it's easy to relate with her but at the same time I can't help but cringe like the Goblin King at her past attempts and conversation with Christian. It's very cute so far, and I can't wait to see more of Jareth... oh lovely David Bowie Jareth

What is this? Throw the readers a bone? I hope we don't have to wait another 3 years for the end.

Sorry you don't care for the fandom anymore. Thanks for the bone. It was good.