Well, I loved this storie at the begenin, but now it's being to dark for me. Didn't obi-wan suffer enougth? I crave for a happy ending, so please, juste tell me how everythings ends well, but don't make me continue reading... my poor heart can't do it!

Wow! A bit cliché but, poor Obi-Wan! Not many people can pull off stories like this...but you managed to do it very well!! I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait to read the next one! Way better than the JA storyline for sure. The emotions were very good- I found myself wanting to put an arm around Obi and kick the jerks putting him through all that.
What will happen next?? Who's behind all this? *bites nails* I have some ideas, but will probably be wrong :D
Obi's pirate friends kind of fell of the face of the earth (or whatever) after they left. I would have liked to have seen what was going on with them, but oh well. :)
Well done! Two thumbs way up!!

...sequel? xD

I just finished reading this story, and it was one I couldn't stop to read. I'd stay up until the wee hours of the morning because I wanted to see what the next chapter held in story for my favorite Jedi (or in this case former Jedi), Obi-Wan. Love it! Can't wait to read the sequel!!

Sequel? Please? Pretty please with something really yummy on top?

Any chance of nudging you muse (with a pointed stick if necessary) to get the sequel to this story done? This is a *horrific* place to leave this hanging, and I dearly want to find out what happens next. You just know it's going to be just as bad or worse than his original torture when the pirates captured him, and without the force to help with his mental stability and help the memories to stay repressed, he's going to deteriorate. At this point I suspect Palpatine is going to get mixed in to try and break Obi-Wan to make a new Sith Apprentice. Getting put into the Republic equivalent of a Maximum security or even a Super-Max facility is apt to come near to breaking him, and with the Sith probably involved, it's going to be even worse. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Wow...

I... have no words...

That was incredible.

What a fantastic story, you are an amazing author.

I really hope you do write that sequel... :)

I'm afraid I'm terrible and don't often review, but this time I simply felt I must. This is a wonderfully well written fic, delightfully complex and compelling. You show a depth of understanding not only of the universe you work in, but also in what makes a solid plot and believable characters. From Obi-Wan to the barristers, each character you portray is individual, full of depth, and important to the plot. This is no mindless excuse for angst, but storytelling at it's finest. Here we follow not only a good tale about our favourite characters, but learn more about our own humanity along the way. Thank you. It has been an absolute delight to read and, of course, I would be delighted if you do manage a sequel.

So I just found this story and read the entire thing and it was pretty great and all I'm left asking is:

WHERE IS THE SEQUEL?!

interesting story line. i cannot wait for the sequel

I just started reding this story a few days ago and have read it threw this last chaper. This is by far one of my favorite stories of all time. And I mean it too, b/c I have read at least several thousand stories, on star wars alone.

I must be honest, when I read the chapter where Obi was on trial and on the stand, I cried. No really I did. It was so touching the way you described the way Obi suffered and how Qui-Gon was there by his side.

This story is unique in the way your shaping the star wars story, I have never came across a story where Obi was actually taken by the pirates and then made a family with them.

You should be proud of the awsome story you've wrote.

Keep up the good work.

Can't wait to read more

A fic this long, full of angst, pre-TPM and i've never read it? Shame on me! Fave so I can go back to it. Can't wait to read. Currently need sleep tho

Any hope for a sequel? Awesome story.

This is an encredible story! Could you possibly email me when you start the sequel? I'd really appreciate it...

Ah, a work of pure genious. You had me crying, smiling, and sitting at the edge of my seat. A real master piece. You are to be commended.

May the force be with you, always

Rivan Warrioress