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Reviews For: unspoken

Chinksta
2008-05-03
ch 5,
abuseThis was... intense. So beautifully written... I wanted to cry.
bigfan
2007-11-18
ch 5, anon.
abuselost for words. dame you have a talent girl! please continue! soon.
OriginalBubble
2007-03-27
ch 1,
abuseI beg you finish this fic, I've read this and heaven and hell like 5 times each - at least, and i am appaled too, to find that i didnt comment. Have you left are you not going to continue? YOU CAN'T LEAVE US LIKE THIS! *hmph*
Murdoca
2006-12-09
ch 5,
abuseI really love your story! The way you used imagery to make the story seem fuller. It's I wonderful plot line. But we are kind of left hanging at the edge. It seems as if you're going to write something more to this. Please tell me you are. Once again it was a wonderful story!

-Murdoca
bad
2005-07-10
ch 5, anon.
abusemore, update more!
Suffering Angel
2005-03-12
ch 5,
abuseah evil evil evil evil
how DARE you leave us hanging like that?!?!?!?! ah!
unless you have a sequal somewhere out there *goes to hunt*
Hydra-Star
2004-06-05
ch 5,
abuseOnce again, this is superb. I love it. I must admit, I liked Heaven and Hell better, but this is still great! Still it doesn't really seem like an end. Is there a sequal? I have to go look. If there isn't, then you should write one, or at least continue. I'm going to add this to my fav stories list. It's just so good! Keep it up!
Machi*Gai
2003-10-07
ch 5,
abuseThe biggest strength in your fanfictions seems to be your use of imagery...this is filled with symbolic relationships, such as the world reflecting her feelings, and the tiger, flower, etc. That's what makes it so interesting... Keep up the excellent writing. ^_^
BTW, I think "wagamama" be better translated as self-centered.
kiril
2003-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery good story!!i have read the continuetion in your webpage,i like it a lot..please continue..it will be a same if you leave it to this!won't be?!
ja ne!
^.^ kiki
Sylphiel
2003-05-15
ch 5, anon.
abuseUm... *cough* I did continue it. Unfortunately, you're not old enough to read it. ^^;
Chibi Dragonfly
2003-05-14
ch 5,
abuseWHAT?!? THAT'S THE END?!? HOW COULD YOU! It has so much great potential! YOU MUST WRITE MORE! Add on to this, it could have a great sequil, with cute blossoming romance! *Starry eyes* *_* Please oh please oh please write more to this, a sequil, SOMETHING! Or I shall be driven absolutely insane. ^_^ Now for the non-insane review...

This was an absolutly gorgeous piece of writing. You captured Zoro and his own frustration perfectly. He drives himself insane you know... ^_^ One of these days he shall be his own undoing. Sanji will help... ^_^" Baka-cook. But he's cute, so. Meh. Not as cute as Zoro! *Is turning review into insanity again* *Sighs* I just can't write normal reviews...

Well, what I really want to say is I love this fic. You are a great writer and I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future.

Ja ne!
~*Dragonfly*~
Psycho Ann
2003-01-09
ch 5,
abuseUgh such a sweet story, riveting and passionate. Please write more! I'm going insane wondering what Zoro and Kuina would do next....
Chou
2002-12-11
ch 5,
abuseAwesome follow up to an awesome fic. Although its driving me mad over what Zoro's gonna do, or not do. More fics, please!
ashez2ashes
2002-10-30
ch 5,
abused*mn! I wish ff.net still allowed lemon chapters. I hope you post the "final" chapter to the op fanfiction list! :)
Y St. Ace
2002-10-28
ch 4,
abuseNan ja? Owari... I sure hope those dots mean that the chapter was done and not the story! Darnit! Don't leave me hanging here.

It's all good, especially Chapter 2; that was extremely well-written.

I'll post more reviews if you put up more chapters!
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