Oh...I like this story!! Your description of the kiss in the gym was perfect. I like the way you portrayed Marcus in this; I can completely see him trying to take care of this "problem" without involving any of the station staff (like Zach) because he's used to being pretty much on his own or just w/the Rangers. All in all a well-written and greatly enjoyed story. I have to echo the other reviewers on here and say "Sequel...please?!?!?!?!?!" *begs author pathetically* :)

poor marcus. and poor susan. great fic

I remember reading this one before. I always like Susan/Marcus stories (as people might have guessed), and this one is very nicely done. Because of that, it is going in my C2 archive.

good chapter. great interaction

He'd give her a few minutes to break a few things first. lol

good chapter

ouch! poor marcus. loved corwin's reaction

"I really would like to be locked up again now if you don't mind, I'd probably be safer with the Minbari." lolol

he's about as subtle as a Pakmara's breath. eew! ;)

poor marcus. poor zack

ouch! poor marcus

interesting twist

good chapter

She hadn't even touched her caff which was another warning sign for a bad morning for all under her. very in character

intriguing start