 ladyflutter 2009-04-10 . chapter 13Oh...I like this story!! Your description of the kiss in the gym was perfect. I like the way you portrayed Marcus in this; I can completely see him trying to take care of this "problem" without involving any of the station staff (like Zach) because he's used to being pretty much on his own or just w/the Rangers. All in all a well-written and greatly enjoyed story. I have to echo the other reviewers on here and say "Sequel...please?!?!?!?!?!" *begs author pathetically* :) |
 Natters 2006-06-23 . chapter 13poor marcus. and poor susan. great fic |
 Hilary Weston 2006-06-03 . chapter 13I remember reading this one before. I always like Susan/Marcus stories (as people might have guessed), and this one is very nicely done. Because of that, it is going in my C2 archive. |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 12good chapter. great interaction |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 11He'd give her a few minutes to break a few things first. lol |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 10good chapter |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 9ouch! poor marcus. loved corwin's reaction |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 8"I really would like to be locked up again now if you don't mind, I'd probably be safer with the Minbari." lolol |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 7he's about as subtle as a Pakmara's breath. eew! ;) |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 6poor marcus. poor zack |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 5ouch! poor marcus |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 4interesting twist |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 3good chapter |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 2She hadn't even touched her caff which was another warning sign for a bad morning for all under her. very in character |
 Natters 2006-05-26 . chapter 1intriguing start |