startings of a good story, but it's a bit confusing.

i hope it comes clearer soon!

Interesting, but why did you stop writing?

Lovely story, very well written as usual. Am interested in where this will be going. Will your characters be interacting with Harry?

Glad to finally see this updated... Please make something of this. You obviously have the talent to carry it on. :)

This story is very well written. I really like the part in the beginning about dissapearing when it was time to do the dishes. hehehehe. Brilliant!

This is very well thought-out as well. It's really interesting how you tell the reader about Madriga being in Slytherin at the beginning, and how her actions don't really reflect the decision. This makes the story stand very well on its own, but I believe that it would work very well if you continued, also. I don't know if that had been your original intention, and even if it wasn't, it would be really great to expand with these great charachters you've created.

smiles

Oh oh oh, please write more! I'm in love with your characters already! Your style of writing is completely addictive. This is brilliant.

Very interesting start. ... What happened to Anna? Did she get into Gryffindor, like she planned?

Looking forward to seeing where this ones going!

Cool story, Keep it up and update soon _

Nice one. Such a peculiar style of writing, the thoughtful sort that drifts away so easily. _ I shall be looking forward to more!

Good use of vocabulary...

maybe a little more dialogue would suffice?

but otherwise, an extremely well written story

much better than some of mine?

lol by the way did u like my posh writing ? loool i probably spelt half of that wrong lol im more of a hyper person maself,

but to put it bluntly

i fink maybe u shud have a had a teensy bit more speakin in da beggining but it woz a kewl fic,read somne of mine

ur a gud writer, carry on!

*DaRk ChILd*

Oh, you're an excellent writer! Hey, if you read my fan fic, I'll get more people to read yours. I just love the way you ended it! You have me hooked!. I'll go get those people, read mine and I'll get more.

intresting plot. write more