|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| OutOfMySystem 2008-08-12 ch 7, | abuseVery good satire of "Mary-Sue"-ism in MGS. Admittedly many female original characters are considered Mary Sues for completely silly reasons, but certainly these 'absolutely perfect obvious I-want-Snake-to-bone-me conduit' type characters do need a good lambasting. Hell, I like well-written slash, femmeslash and het, AS LONG AS ITS REASONABLE. Snake/Otacon = pretty reasonable given how they act in the game, Snake/Liquid on the other hand is not. |
| Scarbie 2005-03-14 ch 7, | abuseUh oh! This chapter got kinda personal, didn't it!? The way you censored the names was funny. My favorite intrusion had to be Volgin and Raikov's. *rofl* You had a lot of unexpected cameos. I think you captured Samuel L. Jackson well in this story. He's always going off on someone. The funniest part had to be Kojima meeting George Bush! That cracked me up too much! BTW, thanks for the shoutout! |
| Scarbie 2005-03-14 ch 6, | abuseI love the little Exorcist bit you have in this chapter. *lol* "...leave old Ocelot be!" |
| Scarbie 2005-03-14 ch 5, | abuse*lol* That was hilarious! The Boss was owning folks left and right. I think I read this chapter on your LJ a while back. |
| Chicken Fox 2004-11-14 ch 4, | abuseHeh, I love it! This fanfic is hilarious to most of us, and kryptonite to Mary Sues (You notice that MrsBillyCoen is no longer a member of this site?). Hideo versus Hideo was both as amazing and irrelevant as something from Every Raindrop Counts, and equalled it on a comedy level. Keep it up. |
| Hunty 2004-02-02 ch 4, | abuseSo, MrsBillyCoen has finally gained the pussy to review. You shall be praised for such bravery. First and formost, fuck you. We've all been telling the truth about your sickening, shitty fic. Nobody likes it, so quit writing and get the fuck over it. And you're not much of a better person to flame anyone else when everyone knows your fic is shit, so quit writing, and have fun again. |
| Shakahnna 2004-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI laughed until I cried. Brutal perhaps and I luckily don't know the people you are making fun of but as far as funny goes, you definitely got that down. |
| Scarbie 2003-06-22 ch 4, | abuse*LOL* This is crazy. I think my favorite part was having Snake telling that evil creature that he loved her and then the song coming back in with 'I'm gonna avoid the cliche'. Hideo fighting the evil side of himself was hilarious also. Looking forward to chatper 5. |
| Metal Snake 2003-06-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseho man! When Meryl shows up thers gonna be hell to pay! Please keep going! You know I'm alot like you: I HATE Yoai, and Im a fan of Snake/Meryl parings. (SNAKE IS NOT ATTRACTED TO MEN! AT ALL!!) By the way, I wsed to be supercharger and xtream but this my final name! |
| Shounenainotenshi 2003-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI am as amused as I can possibly get (unless I were a real Mary Sue to Snake/Otacon). This story is so great. It's the atypical MS story. I'd be so sad, if you were serious, though. Mary Sues make me sad. Anyway, I'm also slightly pissed- I'd been planning a story like this for a while. Oh well; easy come, easy go. Did I mention how great this story is? ^_^ |
| Scarbie 2003-04-15 ch 3, | abuseHa! This is a good parody, I'm not too fond of Mary-Sues myself. Auroralya... I can't even pronounce the chick's name, you have to save Snake from her. I think she's some kind of evil being like on Angel. You have to explain how the hell she escaped. Picturing Snake singing the hymn of the Fayth is just too funny. Please continue. I'm interested in seeing where this is going now that Hideo Kojima is involved. *LOL* |
| Blackraven8 2003-04-06 ch 3, | abuselol |
| BlackDelo 2003-01-06 ch 2, | abuseGroovy. |
| GoldenGoddess(I logged in t... 2002-12-29 ch 2, anon. | abuse^.^ I like this. I was planning on doing one for the Yu-Gi-Oh! section (yes, Yu-Gi-Oh! dork, right here). Guess I'll see how it's done first. Continue! |
| Blackraven8 2002-12-18 ch 2, | abuseIt's good. Write more, please. |