wow. I really like both your stories! I really hope you plan on writing more.

Your writing is so good that I can find nothing to say, really. One is even tempted to just not review altogether, but ech; you gotta know that I'm still hooked.

DOn't know what else to say. I just enjoy your writing so much; I appreciate the obvious care and attention to detail that you put into your work. (Along with no small measure of talent).

Update soon!

LMAO. Saitou-torment, eh? This has to be one of the best fanfic universes that I've ever read about. You're so imaginative... and you update quickly too. Loved the chapter.

Oh, well, three chapters in a row! WOW! Weekends are quite complicated so I've catch up with the story just now... Wonderful as ever and I'm wondering who Redemption will touch in his path...after Saitoh... hehehe This Redemption strikes hard... Sorry for not reviewing earlier...

hehehe, Kenshin with wings..sure to scare the hell out of Saitoh

Ahh! Perfect! And that was such a... sensuous chapter too. Enjoyed it very much.

Whoa. This kinda reminds me of that novel 'On a Pale Horse' by Piers Anthony. Once again, I've enjoyed your writing immensely so far, and no, unfortnuately I don't know the poem.

I guess I'll find out, though.

Can't wait for the next update.

T.S. Eliot's "The Hollow Men." Good job. It's nice to know that there is actually a ffn writer out there who knows what real poetry is.

Hi! Wonderful as ever1 always a pleasure to read you, and I only regret you have such a few reviewers. I have a theory about this but it's not to make it publicy... Well, In the titles of every chapter are hidden the last verses in Tomas Sterns Eliot's poem THE HOLLOW MEN. Nice detail...

I fell in love with 'Patience' as with your first part of the story. I'm REALLY sorry it don't get the true recognicion it deserves. Your have weaved an intrincate Universe, with a wonderful dose of imagination and mixing in it the elements of old Traditions. I admire your art, and bow in front of your talent. Thank you very much for this two wonderful pieces. I love Hikaru, and I truly admire those writers who can draw their OC making them lovable and true as your little 'baby'. Thanks again.

That's a really great chapter, keep writing

It's a really good story

Write more

Oh WOW! I love those books! teh Sano Ichiro murder mysetries.. tehy're so cool. *sigh* a new one should be coming out soon..

cute fic.. but I'm gonna have to read your others now to find out about Hikari and Kenshin's background.. will do!

Oh my god... my eyes about bugged out of my skull when I saw this... I loved your first story it was truly brilliant... now that there is a sequel I will be on pins and needles awaiting the future chapters... :) update soon please!