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| aya hineshi 2004-09-13 ch 1,  | abuseforty six seconds..=) thanks for a good read nice to be in alec's mind. thanks |
| cloudburst 2003-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHiya! Well just wanted to let you know that I think this story really rocks! Ive read this before at DAFF and I decided to reread it here… and well, it still has the same impact! such a superb story! You’ve managed to illustrate alec’s deep character and personality into few words. You’ve somehow let us see what alec goes through… the pain, loneliness and stuff like that! The photographic memory thing was also amazing (about the seconds…) I especially loved the ending phrase… max changing his life forever! Very cleverly and artistically done! Very nice indeed! WOW! Really! Great job you did! Congrats and kudos to you! Be safe! (",) |
| Walzy 2002-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseDon't think I'm just being sarcastic, but the end of this was so sweet! Darn, I thought it was gonna be a Rachel/Alec fic at the beginning or something....I really didn't care too much for her :) I wish something like that woulda happened on the show :) |
| TKD-Princess 2002-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute!! Please write more!!!! |
| RPGirl17 2002-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwww. That was really sweet. Thank you for the story. I loved it. |
| Dia 2002-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseUnique. Completely and utterly original...I love it! While Rachel's death remains a large impact on Alec's quaking life, many authors neglect to forge this into their story's, never fully meeting with such emotional conflict. I'm glad you decided to court with the idea, which manifested into a perfect masterpiece. Great job! |
| EvilSalmon 2002-10-26 ch 1, | abuseAwwwwwwwwwww! I love that timing thing.. the 3.2 seconds for this, 46 seconds for that.. that was really nicely/subtly/skillfully done. Nice job! |
| Ao Tianrong 2002-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was soo sweet, I really wish there would be a small sequel though. Pleaseeeee?????? ^_^ here's hoping! ^_~ |
| alecsgrl 2002-10-25 ch 1, | abuseWow! You really know how to make it short and sweet, which is not an easy task. Nice work as usual!! :) |
| Hindi Sad Diamonds 2002-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThat is so good & oh-so well written!! Loved it! -wuv from the hindi- |
| Dragonfaerie2 2002-10-25 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* What can I say? That was beautiful. Are you going to write a sequel? Please say you are. Anyway, love the story. Dragonfaerie |
| JetBlack 2002-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was really good. i liked how you wrote alec and how her confession wasn't gushy pointless stuff. the time theme and idea was also very good. i'd thought of using it before but i'd never written anything where i could. |
| Willow453 2002-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAaaahhhhhh...... How sweet. An understanding Max. A honest Max. This was great. I know its probably a stand alone, but a girl can always hope. Anyway, great job. |
| Bonnie 2002-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent story. Just the kind of M/A fluff to cheer me up. :) |