I have to admit being very intrigues. You're handling the dark aspect of this fic perfectly with angst to match. Your level of character depth is outstanding, as is the world you paint around them.

you've definitely got my attention for the next few chapters.

[x] Add story to my Story Alert list

I'm sorry about the problems with the first chapter. FF.net is giving me a hard time. You can find the first chapter on my website at

http://w.geocities.com/zorukonotsu/fanfics.htm

Hopefully ff.net won't make the link disappear this time.

I edited the chapter some five times trying to fix it but I imagine it only made it worse. {sigh}

Thank you for your patience.

Well its an interesting story.
Quick note, FF.net screwed up, your prolog has been lost and in its place chapter one has mysteriously appeared.
Good story, original plot. Though you left Ranma and crew and a cliff hanger, so please write about them, i want to know how Ranma knows the vampire super **. :}

This chapter was good. Kinda hard to follow in places but good. I look foward to see how you intermix both story lines together.

*blink*

It's good, don't get me wrong, but...

*blink*?????? (Is confused)

*blink*

It's good, don't get me wrong, but...

*blink*?????? (Is confused)

Although Kasumi as a powerful magician/mage/hero/priestess has been used a lot of times when the author deems Kasumi worthy of being the said hero of thier fic, I find this story intriguing.

What draw/drew (?) me to the story in the first place was the idea of Jusenkyou's bamboo poles being wards (I love details). Basically with the little that you've published I'm not sure where you're going, (that's not a bad thing) :)

Keep writing. :) Good luck on this fic.

Rakhal's index is just as good if not better than ff.net IMO. It depends on what you're looking for. FF.net has more fanfics, but they aren't screened, nor are they organized seperately into genres, and as MingShun mentions not everybody is on ff.net. Furthermore on Rakhal's site you can look under Rakhal likes and be reasonably sure of being entertained.If you want to read a new fanfic and don't want to spend hours wading through fics you aren't at all interested in Rakhal's index is the way to go. I don't think either FF.net or Penultimate Ranma Fanfic Index "sucks". I think they are both excellent ways of finding new fics to read.

Thank you for your reviews though. I write for myself, but I post for feedback. The briefest of comments is helpful. Without the reviews, I'd feel like I was writing to a brick wall...

...Hint hint :-)

Wickedly good. Great writing style. The plot seems original! Please keep writing.

Some people aren't members of ff.net, you can still find their stories in the penultimate ranma index though. That or tass.

Great story by the way. I think it's well written, and entertaining.

I like this story. Vampires are cool.

So is ff.net, we always get the best stories here. I was looking at a place called the penultimate ranma index yesterday and BOY does that place suck. Don't ever index your stories there, only losers do that. Stay here instead.