Awh. That was so wonderful. You characterized Holly so well, down to every "darling".

In the book Holly and Paul don't reconcile and I believe she does go to Brazil where Paul later reads a letter or newspaper article about her or something but never meets her again and only has the memory of their time together. I liked the movie ending better with the reconciliation although Truman Capote is rumored to have hated it. I like that song Moon River too.

I really like this. This would make a great ending to the film.

Good job!

great story!

Superb. : )

You left out parts of Eponine's song "On My Own" which is like the best song in Les Miserables. Go back and listen to that song and THEN write a fanfiction.

Darling, I didn't need to read this fic to find out what would have happened, I just read the book. In the book, Paul and Holly don't get together. Paul ends up moving away from New York, and Holly remains an enigma.

Wow, that was really deep! it was wonderful! It was so descriptive and meaningful.

You fic was so good. I love Breakfast at Tiffany's. This was great! Aw!

Luv Claire!x

This is nice, but you haven't really gotten into Holly's mind.

wow...all that time i was nearly about to burst into tears because not only does the movie always make me bawl, but i thought you werent going to let them get together. that was a beautiful story and i think you write beautifully...wow! great job! xxoo

i'm excited! YOu used on my own which just happens to be my 4th favorite song of all time. What a good pairing, I hearted that!

Have you read the story? Truman Capote's novella is short and sweet (approximately 90 pages I think). You have to read it, because frankly the movie ending is nothing like the book. I thought for a minute there that you were going the same path (not the case.) Nice story. Sappy, but nice.

*sigh*

This is *perfect*

Absolutely, wonderfully, perfect. Seriously. You captured Holly completely and I have a feeling that if Capote wrote his novel in Holly's voice it would sound something like this. ) B T has to be one of the hardest things to write, just because it has such a unique style to it, almost like Fitzgerald, you know, and you completely got it. I can see Holly thinking this in the last scene of the movie! Its perfect! Oh..thanks for the compliment on my blog!

Btw- I added this to my Favorite Stories list!

I love it!

I DIDN'T KNOW THIS WAS UP.

And that upsets me greatly.

BECAUSE THIS IS FANTASTIC.

Do you think I could sound any more like a fifth grader? Because it is amazing, Kara dear one, and I love it.