 FOJtwilighter 2008-08-12 . chapter 2omgsh! i loved this story! can you say CUTE!! you should write more! |
 ^^^Grape^^^ 2006-09-29 . chapter 2 Oh my god this so rocked PLZ PLZ PLZ Write more PLZ i wanna know wat happens NEXT PLZ WRITE MORE
^Grape^ |
 astrakane 2006-09-10 . chapter 2okay, i really really enjoyed your fic! please an another chapter! i love your michael, and your vision of his familly ^^ |
 Amiri 2006-06-30 . chapter 2Great story. |
 BlondeGinny05 2005-08-22 . chapter 2Hey, this is really good! Very humorous. Are you going to write more chapters like this, or was that it? Please let it be the former. Good job. |
 Still Stargirl 2005-01-05 . chapter 2That was great! Ah! Silly Dr. Moscovitz. Silly silly man. 'Course Mia doesn't know. Michael's still half-denying... |
 Still Stargirl 2005-01-05 . chapter 1Positively hilarious! Hehehe. Oh, denial it all you want, Michael--but it's not going to go away! Bee-yoo-ti-ful. You're a fantastic writer. |
 Literati Lover 2004-11-16 . chapter 2Aww how funny and adorable! You really should write more! Like maybe you could write what happens now that Michael did realize it, because I like ur writing style! :)
-Nikki- |
 Nikki(Literati Lover) 2004-11-16 . chapter 1 cute yet humorous! good job! |
 pabo 2004-11-14 . chapter 2 hee hee! I like it! Just one itsy bitsy thing though, when they were telling Mr. M the two lessons of michael giving in, you wrote:Just because you don’t see something doesn’t mean it’s there. I'm assuming you meant to write: Just because you don't see something doesn't mean it isn't there. Just thought I'd point that out. Anywho, keep writing! |
 Ash-of-Evenstar 2004-09-11 . chapter 2lol...this is really good...
“Damn, I wish it had been the Chinese takeout-“
i love it...keep writing! |
 Hopeless Romantic 2004-01-26 . chapter 2 LOL, that was sheer brilliance. And again, completely original. I loved it! Adorable.
If you don't become a professional writer, I'll...well, I'll be really ** off! I would totally buy your books.
You are superb! Keep it up! |
 DrAcOLuVeR79 2003-12-06 . chapter 2Awesome story! Must read more soon! I love it! |
 White Rabbit Tale 2003-11-13 . chapter 2Ohh that was great! I thought maybe it'd be funny to have the parents have an ongoing bet and it ends when Mia and Michael start going out or whatever. Anyway, I just want to say I love it and I HOPE you will update. |
 Sarahamanda 2003-10-26 . chapter 2I like this story. It a good story. |