Reviews for The Light on the Dark Side of Things

Reviews For: The Light on the Dark Side of Things

gcprincess 2005-01-17 ch 2,	abuseHey. I really like what you've wrote so far and I'd love to read more. I love reading romances and I think you've chose the right character to write for. I don't critise stories much, but I don't see anything wrong with this story to even critise. I'd love to hear the next chapter. Keep writing.
FallingNightmare 2004-11-12 ch 1,	abusePLease finsh up with chapter three. I really want to know what happens I am just wating so if you can hurry it up please. I am not goign to beg cuz I am not like that. Well I just hope you finsh it up and good job with the work so far.
mad-gal-ozzy 2004-10-26 ch 1,	abuseBRILL! FAB! i liked this alot. i laughed out loud when i read the egging part. good luck with the next chapter!
FallingNightmare 2004-10-25 ch 2,	abuseI really liked it. I t was funny about the egging but you shuld also contuine to add humor but dont loose the romance or what ever between tommy and melody. Good luck writing the story's other chapters.
jd burns 2004-04-30 ch 2,	abuseWe'll see if the site will let me review, but this sounds familiar. How come you haven't updated recently? g
P.I.D 2004-04-17 ch 2,	abuseIt's good. But I do have some advice: Tommy's an alien. He should be speculating more...not so moody. Also, pick a tense and stick with it. It's annoying, I know, but believe me, it's even more annoying to read a story where the tense keeps on being switched. Past or present, CHOOSE!
MysticSorceror 2003-03-06 ch 2,	abuseGreat job! I really liked how you used the characters. Your right Harry doesn't need anyone, (he's my fave character.) I like how you've used Tommy just like any normal teenage boy! I loved it ^_^
jd burns 2003-01-05 ch 2,	abuseDick at a parent-teacher conference. LOL I can just see that.
jd burns 2003-01-05 ch 1,	abuseThe use of present and past tense both is a little confusing. Could you please be a little more consistent next time and use either one or the other? I did like the Tommy/Melody interaction though as well as Dick's comment about "inconsiderate beings".
kirsten 2002-11-05 ch 2,	abuseAww. That was good. Don't let that other person's review keep you from continuing this, I think its a great idea, and for the most part written very well. Plus, there's always some room in this section for more 3rd rock fics! :) -Kirsten
KittenOfDoom 2002-10-27 ch 1,	abuseIt's a little something called constructive criticism. If you can't take it, then don't write fanfics. As you can see, if you take just two second to look, I'm in the middle of writing four other fanfics that are stuck in my head, so right now I can't write one about Third Rock. Yes, I have imagination...but I think you should at least try to make them act a little more...well in Tommy's case, more like an alien who is confused about humans. Alright? I have to deal with constructive criticism all the time, it's there to help you write a little better. When I comment on someones fanfic I try to help them, not hurt them, ok? Ok...Yea.
KittenOfDoom 2002-10-26 ch 2,	abusePunctuation...typos...some yes...But the main thing that stuck out was you had soooo many 'ands' everywhere! Also, no student talks like that, unless they're goody-goody's and they don't get sent to the office. Just thought you ought to know. And for the first chapter...kids wouldn't talk to each other like that and Tommy does NOT act like that! As far as I've seen, and believe me, I'm a bit of an addict! >.

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