You have such a professional writing style. I never imagined Sailor Moon to sound so Star Treky and political, adding more flavor to the story. Excellent story sofar.

You know what? This is one of the few 'new series of characters' fics that I'm actually looking forwards to reading. Great ideas, though I'm a bit confused on the 'Cannot defend themselves' part, its overall effect is very nicely written. Keep up the good work!

WOW. I really am liking ths story. It's certainly interesting. Though I really think you are bringing in too many new characters at the same time. i mean, I'm becoming really confused with all those new names and not to mention hçtheir secret identities. Thank God you put Unazuki and Motoki and greg's brother there, if not it would be even more confusing. But... I still don't understand the *real* conflict between the Champions and the Senshi. I mean, there was a war ten millenias ago but I still don't get what or who caused that war. Will you explain it in the next chapters? BTW, I find the 'parallel plot' - the story of the Dark Kingdom- very interesting. I'm dyng to know what those youmas are planning. And I'm also dying to know what Greg saw in his visions and Pluto's secert. I'll be waiting very (im)patiently for the next chapter. Bye. Leni.

what supers is about is where they have to fight queen neheria who is after the dream mirrors . of all the dream mirrors there is one that is golden . inside contains helios who is the priest of elusion, the land of dreams. He is also chibiusa's lover

*gives the glomp of doom* FINALLY! Some GOOD Sailor Moon fanfic! I'm so desperate for it, and so few are creative and well-written. It's nice to see OC's that AREN'T Mary Sues, a fascinating (and apparently well considered) plotline, and someone who knows where there taking a story, rather then just letting it wander down whatever path. Keep up the good work- this is joining my favorites list!

I love this story, write more soon and hurry up...please!

Ah, another chapter! _ And it just keeps on getting better...The action was great...I'll be keeping an eye open for the rest as it comes out.

Great work! One of the best "new warrior" type stories I've read on ff.n - excellent characterization all around. Thanks for the good read.

Hey, bro! Why don't you post the rest of your stories, too. They're also really good!

I'd just like to say thanks to all of you who have reviewed this fic. It's responses like this which keep me writing.

Just wanted to say that I finished the posted chapters...still very good. Unazuki? And Motoki? Interesting...I like it. Good work.

This is a wonderful fic. Very nicely written, and very well done. I haven't finished the chapters yet, but I plan to, and soon. I'm glad you're facing the senshi off against a different kind of villian...or non-villian. It will be interesting to see how the others develop like Ares, and how the senshi face them. Keep up the good work.

Good story, although I don't know how you take to suggestions like this (cause you may already have planned out who the champions are going to be), but here goes... It would be quite ironic to have Shingo be one of the champions or more specifically the champion for the moon (if there is one). As always keep up the great writing. :)

Sweeeet...write the next part ASAP!

Good story, I can't wait for the next part. Keep up the good work. :)