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Helloviviankarume1yahoo.com 7/6/11 . chapter 1 Hello, My name is vivian i saw your profile here( ) today and became intrested in you,i will also like to know you the more and estabilish a relationship that is bassed on truth and trust with you i want you to send an email to my email address so i can give you my picture for you to know whom i is my email address () I am waiting for your mail to my email address above please i have something very very important i will like to tell you.I believe we can start from here! Remeber the distance or colour does not matter but love matters alot in life. vivian.. () |
the writer formerlyknown as lm 7/12/05 . chapter 7Have you ever seen the movie *Wild Things*? Where everything you know is not what it appeared? That's kind of what you did with Phoebe's puppeteering. Good job for a first story. |
VtE 5/19/04 . chapter 7 I really liked it! _ |
Icy Flame 3/29/04 . chapter 7That was awesome. I always make cracks about her puppet master quote with my friends and I busted up when I saw that you noted it in your story. This was really great. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Those two are just so cute together! I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future. I like how you tied all the loose ends up in the ...well end. *grins* *glomps author* *waves* Later yo, Icy |
yasha 12/30/03 . chapter 7 Aww so sweet! Pheobe seems like Iago (from Othello, don't care if you have no idea about it) gone good here, I like the way you've written this. |
Nevyn 12/24/03 . chapter 7Place a comma after ‘assistant’ so it is ‘assistant, Tag’ instead. And in chapter 5 when they are hugging on the couch, Joey ‘patted’ Chander’s shoulder, not ‘pat’ it. I think that so far this story is my favorite out of the one you have written. I like this one a lot. You did a really great job. You really do a great job with everyone's characters, you know that? |
Nevyn 12/24/03 . chapter 5*snaps fingers* Darn! I thought for sure they were going to get together. Oh well. They have time. The horoscope needs to fulfill itself first. And it to bad that Joey lost his job. |
Nevyn 12/24/03 . chapter 4Is the herbal drink an aphrodisiac? That would've been very sneaky and underhanded on Pheobe's part, but very amusing too. This chapter was very funny. Pheobe is such a fun character in this. She’s really great. And no one has given a gift to Chandler yet so it' natural her plan couldn't be fool proof. |
Nevyn 12/24/03 . chapter 2probably being defencisive of Chandler. but still, it had to suck loosing her help on the rent. they sure are in denial since it has been so long and they are still not together. they need to just sit down and have a nice long bonding moment. *nod nod* |
Nevyn 12/24/03 . chapter 1yes, that is a nice thing that he did for joey, inventing a game like that. he just has a big soft spot for his best friend. it's very sweet. |
Darkstar Dragon 12/21/03 . chapter 7 This was a very sweet story. _ You know she really does fit as the puppet master of the group; I mean she acts so ditzy you'd never expect it. _ Great job with this fic! _ |
Darkstar Dragon 12/21/03 . chapter 7 This was a very sweet story. _ You know she really does fit as the puppet master of the group; I mean she acts so ditzy you'd never expect it. _ Great job with this fic! _ |
julia 5/21/03 . chapter 1 Thanks for telling me about this story, it's really good. I always wondered why no one had written a story about that before, it seemed like such a obvious beginning for a slash story. I really like the boat story too, please update soon. Julia |
Kellykuk 1/23/03 . chapter 2brill story! who would have thourght it, Joey and chandler! |
Cress 11/7/02 . chapter 1Thanks for the review, Exintaris! Because the story progressed over several episodes in season 6, I did tend to throw every detail in to try to give people an idea of the passage of time, and to give context for the small incidents that I focused on, like Chandler being "the queen of everything." I will try to cut down in future on unnecessary plots. As for Richard moving in with Monica, I never gave much thought to it, because Monica seems to love the apartment so much that I just assumed she'd talk Richard into moving in. |