hey there..i really like your story especially Tifa's character in this one..i totally can relate with her as i read and unlike some cheesy fics out there, i find yours quite cool and heart thumping at the same time

looking forward to more of your cloti fan in the future!

^^

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Ah... one of the most enjoyable romantic stories I've read for Cloud and Tifa. Love it from beginning to end.

and by the way, it just struck me this story is written so long ago! What? 2002?2003?

Now is July 2009 when I read this

Lol i love this story
Beautiful ^^
CloTi rules
and the end is so sweet

Beautiful story. Good work :)

loved this story a lot! r u planning to continue it? that would be great! keep up the good work

the first half of this story was wonderful, i really liked it. very intriguing and well done. but after ch 5, the plot just seemed to lose the setting--what exactly was the time skip? which were memories/flashbacks and which were actual events happening in real time? why the sudden skip in tifa's character? after ch 5, her char seems to not remmber cloud at all. very inconsistent. maybe add more detail to explain that sudden jump. you still have a good writing style; just stay consistent with your plot and characterization! i liked the last sentence of ch. 10 though. ;) please keep up the good work!

Ahahahaha! U wrote the sentences backward! Smart! I love this fic! UPDATE^^

kool story
so sad bout the tifa and cloud thing though...always ends up that way, huh? too bad. great story so far though
~kk

I loved it... really.

well, at the end of the game I had millions of gil to spare, so I guess that they being millionaires it's not so far fetched after all...

i love this story
soo cute
and i love your writing skills

I really like this story! I never lost interest for a second!
There's nothing wrong with millionaires ^-^ money is good lol

awsome story! i myself felt might stupid for not getting those last words that were backwards, but all together, u did a nice job, i bow to u XD, not that u can see me bowing, but, well, u get the point