Most excellent!

that was...wow! I...I...wow!

wow that was very dark and chilling. I love stories that catch an atmosphere like that.

Wow . . . That was so sad. You actually made me cry (and thats not easy). You write wonderfully, keep it up.

I never really paied attention to Dean's character in the serie by JKR but I can't think of another person's point of view that could be as much powerful.Really great. Well done!

Extremely powerful. Very well-chosen poems, and just incredibly moving. It's notable that you chose Seamus as narrator, someone so normal, so invisible, who we would usually pass over. It's so easy to forget that he and Harry shared a dormitory for years, was Harry's classmate for just as long as Ron. The emotion in this one-shot really slams home. Favorites.

wow, a lovely piece :)

Really beautiful.

*sobs uncontrollably* that was so sad, and so beautiful! Oh God I'm crying my poor little heart out now! I loved it, I really did. *still sobing uncontrollably*

emotional.

"And the small, so very small, body resting in Dumbledore's arms...

and then the silence descended."

So heartbreaking, yet wonderful. I loved the poems they seemed to fit the situation perfectly.

*sniffle* wah that brought tears to my eyes! who's point of veiw was it though?

great story

God!...That was so sad...It touched me beyond words..
The emotions was so real and raw...I cried...You made me cry...I loved the part where Dean couldn't draw his eyes

** man scuze the language, but oh god that was so good.
i cried, right fomr the part descrbing them running down the hall on that april morning, and from then on i lost it
so sad, but brilliant

wow that was way intense. you really know how to move a person i look forward to more of your work.