very nice, perhaps you could expand that last omake to a real fic...

honestly I want to see naruto and mandy as keepers for the sheer fun of it

Awesome, I'd found this story before but didnt know it was on , and definitely didnt think it was still getting updates, good to see i was wrong :)

Not a bad story over all, could use more polish, more descriptions of the events from time time but not a bad effort. The romance/lemon scenes are perhaps the worst part. Simply marking them deleted all the time is really anoying. I know is some what prudish but there could at least be some kissing and all the events leading up to the actual acts. Not to mention cutting out the conversations as well Ranma suposivly had with his Mistress on her personal life.

In the end I really have to ask why such a hack job was done to the romance, even this website allows more romance then this and I think it could of gone better. If nothing else I have to ask is if this story is reposted in full on any other websites with less restrictions?

That was an awesome story. I loved the last omake. I can't wait to read your Ukyou version of it.

Ok I had to comment about that last omake. It was funny as all hell. I can't wait to see more of them.

Update Soon.

Great Job. You took Dungeon Keeper THEN YOU TOOK ALL THE ** EVIL OUT OF IT.

They're not evil, they're just misunderstood my **. They're completely, utterly, gleefully, ** evil. This Emo Keeper horseshit is revolting. You only have to listen to the speak, or hell, listen to the .wav files of the first games briefings to figure that out!

I suspect the Powerful are either:

1) Inactive, having taken up refuge under the former Rebel Dark Gods who recruited them, ala the Horned Reapers (save for Horniculus, of course), or

2) Fled to other worlds using all their accrued power to flee via their Hearts. This of course makes them SEP.

3) Serving under DK Ukyou, thus no longer in that world, since she's not stupid enough to think her native doppleganger or the allied Keepers would not notice her forever, and thus left to her homewold via HER Gategem, taking anyone under her with them and leaving the others to sidle into Ranma's Harmonia instead. (Ukyou, in any reality, tends to be very.. pragmatic.)

That's all jusrt my opinions, of course.

Egads, you live!

GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Great ending to the story.

awesome... Horny could do so well in so many stories... like Starcraft, Harry Potter, Wheel of Time,

scary thought... the Chronicles of Narnia

LOL, Ranma gets the girls, Genma gets the ever-living heck beat out of him, and Kasumi and Nodoka in marriage partnership? Neat! Great to see this, and had a really blast reading this, and going to look forward to your next fic, and congrats on making this work out for all the good guys here, even Kuno.

This started out great dude... but after he arrived back in japan everything just kinda... well, to say it bluntly: it failed. *shakes head* Still amoung the better fics here though. *looks around yeah... still one of the better ones.

This has been good and I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!