Well not too bad. Though it doesn't have quite as much of Ukyo as I hoped. Though I admit she is a bit more normal then your average Nermian which makes it difficult to write about her. Perhaps at side adventure where she decides to use her abilities to disguise herself and do some espionage herself at the next , or even on the sillier side would be that she gets nostalgic about cooking and wants to open a restaurant one the towns she captures, but finds that there aren't any good supply of raw materials . . so she finds a non - keeper danger sucking out the life of the land. She competes the 'quest' herself . . using her combat \ spell skills . Now called a Hero by the land the next time she goes the next lord . The Peasants revolt doing all the work for her . . .to her disappointed horde. Good Luck.

I love variety. Any chance of an update to this since Dungeon Keeper Ranma has already been updated recently?

eh the magic boost for ukyo has ruined the fic also why is there no next generation of the time keep?

this one kinda sucked, you did a good job of adding flesh to the other side but other then that it isn't a very good improvement over keeper ranma. it would be nice though if you added those changes to that story, it would make it better really.

imortis

I can't decide which dk story i want you to finish first. heh.

Oh well, best of luck.

rogue1615