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| ???????????????????????????... 2005-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LIKE IT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Darkened Soul1 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abuseHey, great fic...I'd prefer to be a Domon/Rain fic. But whatever you decide it to be, just please continue soon. |
| Killer 2003-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think that this is a piece of crap. |
| Celestia 2003-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought there's supposed to be more that one chapter? Either that or my coputor's screwed (now that i think of it, that probaby true) anyway, this is really good. |
| Leon 2003-02-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt should be D/A that is the only tru romance in G Gundam |
| R 2003-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, me like, me like a lot! giggle yup, you are definitly good... now you just gotta finish what you started keep up the GREAT work!!! oh, i liked your other story too... |
| Sween~rain 2002-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hope you continue this fic. i think it should be a George/Rain fic. I'm not a very big fan of Domon/Rain even though I don't hate him. I just like George more. ^__~ Anyway, great story. Like I said, hope you continue it. |
| AnGeL27 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuseawww...dude, you gotta make this a G/R fic, that'd be AWESOME! but i love the story so far, keep it up! |
| Straya 2002-10-28 ch 1, | abusew00t, more fan fic from you! You know I'm a huge fan of the whole George/Rain/unrequited love thing, so this fic was right up my alley. I think the thing with the Shuffle going public is alright, overall. I mean, Domon did make all those hefty promises and vows at the start of the finals, and people here and there knew he was the new King of Hearts. More than likely, after playing such a huge role in the defeat of the Devil Gundam, people will probably know who they are, anyway. Anyway, writing crits... A few typos here and there. Other than that, it looks pretty good in terms of technical junk. I'm hoping that while this may lean in the direction of George x Rain, it'll remain true to the characters. But for as good as your other fic was, I don't think that'll really be any sort of issue, here. You know these characters, and what they would and wouldn't do. Write on! ^_^ |
| Iria2 2002-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI know I am reading trully good fanficiton when I completely forget that I'm even reading a fanfic and this was one of those times. At first, I had doubts, but right after your first descriptions of Rain, I was totally immersed in the story. My only complait is that it is too short. I am a fan of D/R pairings, but I leave the final decision up to you. I look forward to reading more of your work. Good Luck! (o^_^o) |
| Dr. Breifs Cat 2002-10-26 ch 1, | abuseNow that I start thinking about it, I have no idea when the Shuffles went public, or if they even did. Aside from that, this was a good start and I really look forward to seeing where you'll take this story. It's a bit too short to be leaving me in suspense, but your last fic was so good that I've been keeping on eye out for anything new. Certain motivations, huh? If you mean reviews it probably won't take much to know what my vote is... |
| Sora-sama 2002-10-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting idea, good start. I like your descriptions as well. As for your timeline question, the Shuffle Alliance had been revealed after Shinjuku. And, I think theoretically, that the Shuffle Alliance had been publicly announced about the time Domon fought his battles against his Shuffle partners. So, yes, it was before Rain left to join her pa. Hope that helps. |