now that i know this story hasn't been forgotten, i can't wait for the next chapter.

Hi, just wanted to say I really enjoy your reading. I found this 'longing' series while googling for paris/rory fiction at . I've just finished reading up to the chapter before this one, and as the ralst website doesn't seem to say when each story was posted, i wasn't sure how long ago they were written. It was a nice surprise finding another chapter here on ! Thanks for writing, and please continue

love it, you are a wonderful writed and i can not wait for more

Oh My God!(I'm squelling in girlish joy) I've been waiting for your new chapter to come out and I just knew it was going to be brilliant!

I love how you go into great detail and all your words are just perfect. I've reread this story like 6 times. It is so sexy how you write Rory and Paris to be. Awesome, awesome, awesome.

(Takes a deep breath) Ok I better stop now or I'll just go on continually gushing.

That was the best chapter thus far, by far.
While the only part I had a problem (if you can even call it a problem) is Paris' actions on Rory under the table during dinner. Seemed a little unrealistic, but still entertaining nonetheless. Especially where Rory screamed 'Oh my God...this desert is so good', that part had me rolling despite my earlier statement on said event. Does that even make sense?
Anyhow, the Emily confrontation is what gave this the dramatic punch I was waiting for in this fic and made me glad that I stuck with this story for so long.
Thanks for coming up with this and I can't wait for the next chapter where the girls come out to Sharon. Oh, the fireworks are going to be so pretty!
And adding Emily's POV was a brilliant decision on your part.
Sincerely,
Miguel

excuse the language. OH.MY.FUCKING.GAWD. i cannot even begin to say how thrilled i am for this update! this is made of pure, unadulterated WIN of EPIC PROPORTIONS! thanks to you, sir, i wasn't able to do my paper for a class (i know, paris would've been mortified). but oh, it was SO worth it. i can't help but gush and be all giddy *face-splitting grin*

i just loved the tension and hawt loving here. makes me all warm and fuzzy... i also loved how they stood for each other and how grandpa gilmore and lorelai supported them. daddy gellar was great too. oh emily, you stubborn old cat. come around soon, will ya?

i'm sorry i can't dish out anything helpful or constructive for you. i'm still up there, you know? :P

btw, the reference to gossip girl? awesome. i haven't seen the show nor have i read the books, but i'm in love with waldsen/bleighton. it's amazing what fan communities can do to you.

p.s. Paris = STUD! XD

I'm happy to finally see an update to this story. I liked it, but I did notice some errors in there. I think some were mispelled words while you might have accidentally left out a words too. I can go into greater detail in private messages if you would like that.

I found your story at

and I have to admit, that I'm more interested in Lorelei and paris, that the sweet Rory (just to childlike for me)
BUT after I read some chapters of your sophisticated, funny and brilliant story I'm addicted on them#

and it takes a lot to impress such a picky like me XD

anyway
I want to tell you how much I love this story
and maybe I wont be to lazy and comment the next chapters also (have ben stuck in the 17th) don't know why ;P
best wishes from Germany
thx for sharing

can't believe i've only read this now.

this rocked my li'l world. so many times. oh, and it still is.

hope you post MORE chapters cause you have another recruit for your army--a very loyal one, might i add. and post 'em soon, good sir! we'll be waiting.

Okay, I am loving this fic. I just discovered it this week and I spent ALL weekend (when I was supposed to be doing my taxes) reading it. AMAZING FIC! Please keep writing it. I am dying to see what happens with Paris' dad. And please, please, please, let there be a payoff for the line about Paris and Rory riding a Ducotti in the spring. Yum!!

this is a great story, one of the best femslash stories i´ve read. and trust me i´ve read a lot

this was a really really good chapter. great writing and thanks for not being so long winded about everything. love the sex scenes ;) man they love each other so much and you can read that from your writing. cant wait for the next installment.

OMFG. . . I waited so long for this chapter and it was worth the wait. All the chapters since I began reading this have been worth the wait. I am a devoted reader of this fan fiction. This chapter was amazing. I was wondering when the Francie thing was going to come up and when it did I was so distracted by the two love birds in the darkroom that it totally caught me off guard. I believe that I have commented before on this but if I haven't I must say you are very talented. I can't wait till the next chapter to come out and I thank you for this early Christmas present.

woww... you are doing a really good job there.. great stroy ;)

I enjoy this story very much and was so excited another chapter came out. keep up the great work.