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Black And White Kirara
2009-10-11 . chapter 13
I feel about 99.8% or so certain that you don't plan on continuing this story anytime soon, given your last update was way back in 03, but that's okay, that last chapter could sort of pass as an ending - we never get to know the consequences of their -and dare I say it- star-crossed romance, only they're not planning on giving one another up, and that's definitely enough for me! Wouldn't mind seeing it finished, don't get me wrong, but it's still enough! XD

I really enjoyed reading this fic, words cannot describe it. It's so well written and clever, everything flows together prefectly. I'm not sure what it is, maybe the way the characters are so clueless about one another in the beginning, or how riskque Inu&Kag's love for one another has become for them and their families. Whatever it is, it's had me hooked from the first page onwards, so well done to you for writing such a fabulous fanfiction! And I can say the same for pretty much all of your other stories too, I'm just liking this one the most so far. :)
Trisana Tenebrae
2009-09-16 . chapter 13
I love this story! You have to write more! I want to know what happens!! Please!
playgirlbel
2009-08-25 . chapter 13
I must say that this story is in for the big haul. You really must think about picking up where you left off. It truly is an inspiring story that demands an ending. Please do pick up where you left off the plot line is an extremely complex one to think about but please continue.
Playgirlbel
Twilight Black Shadow
2009-06-25 . chapter 13
Argh! I can't believe you stopped right there! You should continue it. I love it! It's one of my favorite of yours so far. Why did you stop updating? It says you updated your profile in '08 but there's nothing there. Why'd the updates stop?
Heiress of the House of Moon
2009-06-18 . chapter 13
I'm guessing this story will no longer be updated, since its been six years since the last update... but i can always dream right? I just wanted to leave a message saying that I'm really enjoying the story, and I do hope you update sometime!
BlacAngel
2009-06-02 . chapter 13
Hello Rozefire,

I hope you read this review (even though you don't write on here anymore), since I really wanted a chance to tell you what an amazing author you are. Funny to think that I was only in junior school when you wrote this. But that doesn't tell you how great you are lol. Sorry if I go off-topic a lot.

I've read all your stories (and loved every single one, even though I didn't reveiw, but I'll get to that), and I have to tell you that this one is probably one of my favourites. I think that its unfinished, but it could be a ending as it stands, though a very bittersweet one. But maybe that's what I like about it lol. You have such a unique way of writing, and if you ever did persue a career in writing, then I'm certain that you're publishing books now, or you're goddamn close.

As to why I've not reviewed your stories before; since you haven't written anything in around a year (and I'm not trying to guilt-trip you when i say that), I thought it would be better to let the sleeping dog lie, as it were (lol, InuYasha pun). But after reading this through for the second time, as well as being moved to tears (cuz I'm a sap for InuYasha and Kagome), I felt I just had to say something. So here I am, leaving you a very rambley review that you'll probably never read lol.

So, here's my review/letter... Thing. I'll more than likely review some of your other Fics, so keep your eye out for me! Just so you know, the whole point of this reveiw isn't to try and make you start writing again; if you do, then that's awesome and I look forward to seeing something new from you. If not, then it's cool. You've got a busy life away from the Internet, and writing should be something that you do for fun, not because angry strangers tell you to, right?

Oops, rambling again. Anyways, Rozefire, I very much love your work, and I'll continue to read and re-read it for a long while yet!

BlacAngel.
Wierdo C
2009-03-10 . chapter 13
Gods I still love this fic. Some six years later it still rocks my world. Your love scenes are comparable to few other professional authors
mysterychild
2009-02-03 . chapter 12
I just re-read this story and love it more then I remembered. Great story, even if it may never have an ending. At least it's there to be read. ^.^
maisama
2008-05-19 . chapter 13
It would be really interesting to see how this story ends! I do hope that you eventually finish it, its really great and so beautify written!
brakken
2008-03-22 . chapter 13
Yeah, for a while there I was convinced the Romeo and Juliet thing was just a premise, and that the similarities had more or less stopped. Seems I'm wrong though...Hopefully they won't continue too much longer...They might be getting intimate now, but it's at such a cost, how could any human reader feel real happiness for them? I'm way too convinced of how badly this will all end right now. I just hope that I find out how this all ends? It's up to you if you want to continue it, but know that you don't need to stop just because you think people don't like it. I've really enjoyed this story, and I hope that you do continue it, for my own selfish pleasure if nothing else.
brakken
2008-03-22 . chapter 12
Aw...They're so cute, trying to make out after getting hit by a car/slammed into the pavement...Nice action in the beginning, the thumb wars and his own desperation to keep from hurting her were nice touches...Your creativity always amazes me, I don't know how you do it, but you take the most innocuous (and possibly, ok probably) boring activities and make them hilarious...Stakeouts for instance. Ok, not so innocuous. But very boring for the most part. Add gadgets, crowbars, creative dialog, and some amusing side comments, and you've got pure comedy. Nice job with it, I loved the stakeout scene.
brakken
2008-03-22 . chapter 11
Dayum she's evil isn't she? Can't wait to see what happens when Miroku asks him how Kagome going out with Kouga makes him feel...That will be an expression to remember. Nice job with the dialog, and the creativity. It always amazes me how much of a difference all of the little things can make...Nice job with the absence, and then the get together, and especially Inuyasha's complete idiocy, and then of course his redemption. Undone in part by the fish, but oh well...Hmm don't cats like the smell of fish? She must not be as much of a cat as he thought...
brakken
2008-03-22 . chapter 10
Ouchies...This chapter is quite a turn from the previous ones. It was obvious that they'd figure out each others' secret identities sooner or later, but I never expected him to react...quite like that. As sad as it is to say though, you pulled it off well, and I actually now think it appropriate. Not in the sense that it was what he should have done-far from it-but in the sense of what he would have done. Nice job keeping them in character, and in the issues surrounding them. Amazing how something so wonderful could get so sad so fast...
brakken
2008-03-22 . chapter 9
Intense relationships going on here, and not just between Inuyasha and Kagome- I'm really thinking more of his father and him to be honest. I commend you for your handling of the scene where Kagome rips up the film, especially the aftermath. It was poignant and sad, and strangely unsurprising that just as she wanted him to go after her, make her look at him, he was wanting just as desperately for her to look back at him. I found that part very moving. I'm really enjoying this story, so I feel bad saying this, but you really need to proof-read better. There are some very confusing sentences every now and then, and I still for the life of me can't figure out what you meant to say. It makes me sad that a writer as creative and talented as you would have her work marred like this...
brakken
2008-03-22 . chapter 8
Uh-oh...Why do I get the feeling that Sango is more of a Higurashi than Kagome is? Nice cliffhanger again, all the implications of her lines dwarf them completely, making it the single most significant line in the chapter (in my opinion anyway). Inuyasha's rant at his father was also fairly revealing, both to his relationship with the man, and what happened to his mother, and how much he felt for Kagome. Sooner or later though they're going to find out their identities as spies as well...That will sure be interesting now won't it...
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