this is a great story. you should definitely write more. PLEASE!

Interesting. Not enough Jindrax and Toxica being written. And it does hint at their closeness and starts into a possible past for Jindrax.

only problem you have with this fic is the rule for dialogue is a new paragraph shoudl start whenever a speaker changes. It makes for much easier reading and clarity. Also the ending is a tad rushed. I hope you do a continuations since you opened a lot of things up but need to resolve them.

Interesting. Not enough Jindrax and Toxica being written. And it does hint at their closeness and starts into a possible past for Jindrax.

only problem you have with this fic is the rule for dialogue is a new paragraph shoudl start whenever a speaker changes. It makes for much easier reading and clarity. Also the ending is a tad rushed. I hope you do a continuations since you opened a lot of things up but need to resolve them.