It's very beautiful. Your writing is very good - maybe too good for me : when I read your fics, there are a lot of words I don't understand (I'm a poor French girl) like when I read a real English book. But I understood the ideas, the feeling and some of the images : I love it!

That was...amazing...I'm speechless! I can't believe it's over though ~sigh~. Oh well, brilliant fic!

(eyes get huge and buldge out of head) Oh shoot, I thought I reviewed this and I didn't. I've read it about a million times and each time I reread it, it is like reading it for the first time again.

You write *incredibly* well, but I can see you already know that. Darkness like that is very hard to portray with such poetry as you used, words lack the description of the greatness of your writing. Your vocabulary is also very extensive, which is difficult to find in an author these days. That truely adds to the beauty of the way the words flow, and that's really all I can say. I wish I could say more, because you sincerely deserve more, but I have run out of praise and I would be repetitive.

All in all: Excellent job. Continue writing, because you do it so incredibly well.

P.S. If you haven't read my note at the bottom of Untouchable, I give my humble thanks for your review. I feel honored to be reviewed by such a wonderful author as you are.

Now is the story finally complete. Thank you. This last chapter was amazingly fitting, and it rounded up things beautifully. I now feel like I want to go and put a bullet between Knive's egocentric eyebrows and free the world from his heartless being. Great job.

Hey it's me again. I just finshed reading your fantastic fanficton. It was awsome... Maybe make a another chapter? Or maybe no... Oh well.. it was awsome! I love these kind of dark fics..

Hey just wanna say that chapter one was AWSOME! I loved it so much.. am on my way to read the rest. lol the last part ROCK! lol great job dude!

WOW amazing! The BEST Legato/Knives story I've read in a LONG time, if not EVER!

Make more to this story, 'kay? Luv the KxL thing. ^_^

Oooo...
That was good... in ya' know a totally screwed up kind of way but cool nonetheless. You really have a way with words, and characterization/POV for that matter.

Can offer up my first born in the hopes that you will write more, not necisarily of this but just something.

Disturbing and yet satisfying.. TORTURE THE VILLAINS! All good bishonen deserve abuse. >:)

*grins nastily* there's nothing i love better than some good, old-fashioned angst. characters deserve to be tortured. *sage nod*

that being said, this piece is probably my favourite legato and/or knives fic. your interpretation of knives' feelings towards vash and legato is very close to my own (though i generally paint legato as aesexual, but that's a stylistic choice). bravissimo!

Ooh. Cold. Twisted. ...Different. (And a fellow devoted fan of Stabbing Westward, who, >sniff

Wow. This is a fabulous piece of fiction.

I think that is the most twincestuous thing you have ever written. It's very cannon. Like The Fly I could see it happening behind the scenes. More so even because this justifies The Laugh. You know That Laugh. The quote made this even more... mind**ing. Then of course all things that twist like this despite you knowing it's going to make that turn for the cringe-worthy it still sends that jolt of reality up your spine. Poor Legato... he just doesn't get to be his own person, does he?

Summed up in five words or less: Honesty ends at point blank. I just love it.

In a totally non-creepy non-drug involving way.

Person... yeah

squeee! another story so beautifully done!!