 peroxidepest17 3/10/04 . chapter 1I think I've seen this somewhere else before, but I don't remember where. Hehe, but I remember that I liked it there, and I like it here. The onyl suggestion I woudl have is to put some space in between the paragraphs so it's a bit easier to read. Heh, but this is coming from a college student who's eyes are half gone from all the reading any way... might just be me. _ |
 EmperessRose 11/19/01 . chapter 1Oh I just love this story, I read it a while ago, and read it again today. When are you going to add more, I need more, this is to good to stop now! |
 Omi-chan 17 5/28/01 . chapter 1This is a really good dtory. I really like it good job. |
 Sleepy Aya 5/28/01 . chapter 1I liked it D You should write more! |
 ChibiJaime 12/3/00 . chapter 1Ha, I loved it! That was just TOO cute. Write more, write more! |
 siberian 12/3/00 . chapter 1Okay, I actually have read this a while ago on your site, but I haven't commented on it;.., stupid, lazy me;. Nywayz, I like the story and I just wish it didn't stop there. I mean... by Aya's words in the last line, there should be something that will follow! Write again, please, onegai? With more Aya x Ken in it, pleaze? |
 kireiangel 11/10/00 . chapter 1 kawaii! ken is so cute! you have to right something else on this that has Ken x Aya! |
 oldshoe 11/3/00 . chapter 1Oi! Theres more right? |
 fantasymonk 11/3/00 . chapter 1 *grins* That's so sweet! I wanna know what Aya's going to do! *begs* Please? Onegai? *sniffles* A ficcie reader has to know! *bounces* This is cute! Soon what? |
 goddess of tears 11/2/00 . chapter 1loved it...right about now I'm pretty much addicted to yaoi WK fics. |