Great. I guess that was to be expected. But if there's another chapter then write it! Place it up! Please.

Neato

Not terrible.

Quite good

Wonderful

Cool

You probably meant no instead of now.

Interesting

Wow. Nice angst.

Wow. Great.

I really like it plese continue, at least write one more chapter even maybe two, if you want help with ideas or editing just ask, because this is good story, and you've gotten too far to just give up on it now.

O.O, please update soon. I want to see the end, I want to see the end, I want to see the end.

KYA! How cute!

I'm not very good at thinking up things to say in a review, so I don't review each chapter. Anyway, I really enjoy this, and look forward to seeing where it goes.

I have to admit, I saw this coming when I read the summary. But hey, you're pretty good at writing.