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| WallofIllusion 2005-08-13 ch 1,  | abuseHeh. Good job. Very good job. This is going on my favorite stories list. |
| Dark Shadow Slayer 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseLots of blood, lots of pain. I like it! Yes, I am quite sane, thank you! |
| Sour Green Apple 2004-01-15 ch 1, | abuseMalik's practially a masochist! |
| Mystic-fox 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abuseer...yeah... Girl, u r _way_ 2 angsty. U need therapy. Ur stories r wierd. But ur a great writer. KEEP GOING! |
| Kenelfie 2003-07-16 ch 1, | abuseAw!! That's so sad! I have pictures of Malik getting his back carved. email me at green_eyes_silver@lycos.com if you want them. If not, then forget that part of the review. ^__~ ~Green Eyed~ |
| Audacity 2003-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it!! I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not... |
| Gyakutenno Megami1 2003-05-24 ch 1, | abuseIf he actually does end up friends with Ryou, it would make sense. *thought bubble over head with a picture of a tower on the castle in Monster World, Yami Bakura staring at his hand moving against his will, and then eyeing the tower's pointed roof* *shiver* |
| Shenya 2003-03-11 ch 1, | abuseReally.. Shocking? Perhaps. Made more so by the menacing, moody music I have on. O.O I should really stop reading fics like this, they give me nightmares. Well, not really, it just sounded good. But the fic.. It has something that draws me.. So.. Fascinating. Now you probably think I'm completely sadistic or something ^.~ |
| Fiery Charizard 2002-11-05 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful Zoo! very very good, even from a sadistic view ^^ Scarlet Fangs is coming! i shud get it up very soon ^^ take care! FC |
| Alecto Perdita 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuseTotally dark... I love the imagery and metaphors. Poor Malik-kun... |
| Crystal Starr 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuseYou may think I'm sadistic and cruel, but I LOVED this!!!! I think you did such a nice job on this, it was soooo good. It was really vivid, I really loved this. |
| Nefuit 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuseYou could easily become a famous author with your elaborate descriptive style. I loved every bit of it, and it immediatly reminded me of George Orwell's 1984, basically the same opinions. You have got to continue writing. |
| Shadowwolf4 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuseWow!!! This is a great fic! ^_^ I enjoyed it! (yes.. i am a sick indivigual.... --;) anyway, how did you find out about malik? I only know a little bit, but nothing about his past and stuff. could you PLEASE tell me where you got the info????? PLEASE?!!?!? ^_^ |
| lily22 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuse*gulp* Wow... HOW DO YOU DO IT???? *dies* Okay, well, let's take this one step at a time. The whole thing about his gag was very good, I would never have been able to think of that... but this isn't about me. It's about you. I'll stop with that now. Anyways, the thing about reality.... that was quite creepy. Hm... what is real? But, I'm trying to not go off on a tangent here. Bear with me. So, that also was good. And, he let the darkness take over him, or whatever it said. Could the darkness have been Yami Malik? Yah, well, I'll shush now. This was awesome! Really, really, really well done, nice descriptions, whatever. Great. Just write something else like this soon! ^_^ |
| Seena 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThoth above... poor Malik... ...he shouldn't have to suffer so... ... ... *starts crying, then slaps herself* sorry, it's just... ...The confusion, the betrayal... I wish that I could be there, in place of him, so he wouldn't have to suffer so... ... ...that sounds really twisted, and I'm not even a Malik-obsessed person... but, reading this, I just feel so bad for him... this was wonderfully written. |