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Asilem Dlanod
2008-07-11
ch 14,
abuseso cute and... swquirrly... and... arg! that was awesome!
Argenteus Draco
2008-07-10
ch 14,
abuseSo I'd like to begin this review by telling you how much I thoroughly enjoyed the entire Force Bond series. I realize I did not review each part, but that was mostly because by the time I finished one, I wanted to go right on to it's successor.

I noticed only one thing that jarred the reading slightly: you used the word 'locus' a lot where I think it should have been 'focus.' It was mostly in FB 2 and 4, where there was discussion of the Force.

But I think my favorite thing about your AU was your continued use of both original and canon characters. It made them feel more real, somehow, because they weren't people that Luke met once and then forgot; they actually had an impact on his life, and therefor on the reader. (I was especially fond of Crix and Val, and I hope they made lives for themselves away from Alderaan before it was destroyed.) Your characterization of Han, Leia and Chewie was perfect as well, though there were times when I thought Vader's dialogue was a bit shaky. But it's very difficult to write good dialogue when imagining the respirator, which has a lot to do with the delivery of the lines.

And I want you to know that the idea of Luke riding the Bloodfin is one thing that would never have , but it was probably my favorite part of the story.

I'm going to read the extra bits over the next few weeks, but even though I may not review them all, I know I'm going to enjoy them. Your masterful manipulation of the GFFA has already proven that to me.
jojobevco
2008-06-25
ch 14,
abuseA great story
Owl344
2008-06-13
ch 14,
abuseThis story can be counted among my some of my favourite series...in *any* fiction. Humour; love; loyalty; darkness; death; all are there. Not to mention a wonderful plot and good grammar and spelling! I've read everything in the series and I have to admit that I loved it all. I loved it when Darth Vader took Luke to the dentist; when Vader was so blind that, for a time, he didn't realize that he loved Luke and that Luke loved him; when Vader sent Luke to military school and Luke managed to escape; when Luke meets Ben; when Luke thought Vader was dead...I loved it all, even the dark bits. I must admit, though, that out of them all this last story, this final episode of father and son, was my favourite...for Luke and Anakin, in the end, would have given everything up for each other...just like they always would.
Anisky
2008-04-27
ch 14,
abuseWow-- I adored this. I just read this whole quartet in a few days-- when I should have been doing homework, shame on you! I loved the Father/Son dynamic in Star Wars and was thrilled to see it explored in greater detail-- and with such great plot and characterization, too! I just wish I could read even more!
Mrs.Skywalker
2008-04-27
ch 14, anon.
abuseOMG! This series is so incredible! I loved it! it was so sweet! Thank you for writing it! :)
Steve's Place
2008-04-18
ch 14,
abuseWell, (wiping a bit of DUST from my eyes...yes, I said DUST!)

A turly inspiring, touching and amazing series of stories, I wish would never end.

Maybe you could be convinced to continue it, after all there have still got to be new enemies for the new Jedi to fight. I can hope I guess?

I did want to say that I miss Ben. Maybe you could find some way for him to have been off planet at the moment it was destroyed, he was Lucs' best friend and a good friend, and personally I think he had a lot of good influence on Luc...but, oh well, what is, is, I guess? ho hum.

Thank you for writing such great entertainment and sharing it with us.

I have barley had any sleep in the last week or two. LOL

5 + + STARS ( * * * * * + + )

Steve
SkyBlueSw
2008-03-29
ch 14,
abuseThe end of this fic is always so bittersweet to me. Anakin finally able to throw off the darkside and be the loving Father openly and yet he dead to do it.

The very last line always mades me feel sad and sweet Luke says Night Dad.
Saline B
2008-03-03
ch 14,
abuseIs it bad that this chapter made me cry? Gosh I'm such as sap..it's horrible...

but honestly, this was an amazing chapter, I don't think I'd want it to end any other way.
gaby
2008-02-17
ch 14, anon.
abusei
Dizzy
2008-01-30
ch 14, anon.
abuseAh, that is so sweet!
I loved this fic, I stayed up late last night to read, so I got to sleep in this morning. Yes, I am lazy. But I do enjoy this.
crockergirl
2007-12-20
ch 14,
abusePositively wonderful! I have read all of the Force Bond stories and I nearly cried at the end. It was to touching and sweet. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Monks1
2007-09-30
ch 14,
abuseaw... what a great story, its been awhile since i've found a good story on Fanfiction, most authors have been letting me down :(.
pacsi07
2007-09-19
ch 14,
abuseIt was a joy to read! I liked it very much.

"I failed as a Jedi. Now I have failed as a Sith. Perhaps I should try my hand at farming." LOL :D
Zigflorian
2007-05-29
ch 14,
abuseAwesome! I just discovered the Force Bond series, a little late I know, it was absolutely great! I read 1-4 straight through.
~Zig
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