Hey you don't know me but I read your files on this site and I know you like Turok evolution. So maybe we can work things out. You know what I mean. I know you like games & anime so maybe we can work together on this story. It's called Fan Fiction 2: The Battle for earth and it has cartoons & anime joining forces and fighting evil video game characters. So what do you say. We have a deal

Oh my god. Learn to spell. Mi doggs naym iss jeeno hee iss kool! The story made no sense at all. Please take lessons before writing anymore.

I thought this chapter of Turok Deaths Wave was a little better than the first. Mabey you could add a bit more info as to the surroundings in the story it would be great. For example: After spending sevral hours next to the dancing fire listening to ogroths story...and so on, and so on... That dosen't mean I didn't like the story though, I still liked your story. But it could use world images. Like walking along a dusty path or something that would bring the world to life . Thanks...T. Z. Scott

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No more. Please!

The spelling is horrible. I'm not going to TRY to read it, I can't stand stories with spelling like this. Sorry, but, bye.

To be truthful... in total honesty... IT SUCKS!!!
where did you learn to write like that, nursery?!

O'K it was prtty good but I think that the "Dinozoids" are called Slegs,so apart from that it was pretty good.

Oh deary me...this is boring!

Lalala sugoi ((cool))

cool

Good Story! Continue the series. I want to see what happens next.

Not very interesting.