That was confusing at times but it was excellent, write more please!

Whew, months to write, huh? Even longer to read! Good story, though.

it was a great story.Loved it.

Cool story.Kind of confusing with all the Tobias, Rachel and Future Tobias and Rachel.

But otherwise well writen.

cool story except there is too much explaning of things.

That was really, really, really, really, really good! It had a good plot. Maybe a lil cliche in some parts...but hey...it's fanfiction. You're a good writer! keep it up! )

Not bad. It was a li'l hard to follow in some bits, and it jumped around a little. Much better now that you've formatted it.

hey! How is this fic fixed? It's *exactly the same* How was it broken before..?