The imagery here is just incredible. The last verse produced an especially strong image. I don't even know what to say about it except thank you, yet again, for posting such beautiful, honest poems.

I'm sorry if I said you're outside the Christian faith before. Actually I'm really confused. So I'd stop analyzing and begin appreciating your works as it should be; I mean it deserves appreciation- a round of applause as they're all deep in thought. It has a certain quality which, I'm sorry, I don't have words for. Really great poems.

Quite a nice poem you have here. It shows great depth and a creative mind the writer holds.

*Unenlightened Guy*

::gapes:: Wow.

This is absolutely spectacular. Gah! I want to typeset it now...Oh! It's just too beautifully written...

you can write the deepest stuff, i love your poems. this one is just... back to what i said last review, its beautiful. i dont know how you do it, but carry on please...

Well, it was an awesome poem. I didn't get the point of it, but that's just because I usually don't know a good poem's meaning unless it comes and smacks me across my face. ;-) Oh well, it was amazingly (is that even a word?) written though. I have to admit that.
Not much to reply to though! So, yes, you could even call me speechless! :-)

Cherry-san... I can't put what I feel about this into words. THis was deeper than I can think in many different cases. Actually, any case. I thank you for writing this. Please, if you want to talk, just drop me a line.

makes perfect sense....your poem just reached out and grabbed my attention....keep up the good work

Ah, yet another beautiful poem. It's so creative, so heartfelt....wow, i wish i had your talent. Thank you once again. :)

Beautiful. Again :).

Sakura-san...

Beautiful words, beautiful phrases, beautiful...

I don't know how to describe it.

I hope you dinna mind ever if I print this out sometime, to read in AP English instead of that twerp Dostoyevsky...grah.

Sekai wo kaeru!

Um yeah, I just wanted to add, that I only read the other reviews after I wrote mine, and I guess Phantom of Whispers and myself were on the same level of speechless, thus only able to utter 'nice, nice' over and over again. I wasn't copying - I was trying to be original - lol. Had to say that.

Nice... very, very nice. Refreshingly excellent poetry. I don't really have much else of use to say (at the moment) . . . Nice.

Heehee ... I was like that in church when I was a child.
This is awesome.

Nice, nice. The imagrey is AMAZING!! I love it, I really do.

*You have been visited by the Phantom of Whispers*