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Isinuyasha 2006-06-25 ch 1,	abuseOMG...I'M cryin right now. Great Fic...sorry can't say more...begins to sob again
Prongsmate 2006-01-10 ch 1,	abuseHey there! Great fanfic! But...lots of mistakes in there! :\| But I was still able to enjoy your story.. Oh and by the way...what the heck is this?: “Merci de me laisser ont cette chance de nous rêver peut être ensemble pour toujours. Je t'aime, égal vous ne m'aimerai en arrière jamais.” Draco smiled softly as he push few strand of Harry’s hair out of his eyes. “Je plus n'ai laissé désormais mon embêtement rêveur vous. Bon soin de prise de vous-même Harry.” Draco rubbed soothingly at Harry’s cheeks as he tiptoe to kiss him on the lips. “Je vous aimerai pour toujours.” Is that suppose to be French? Because to be quite honest, I couldn't even guess what Draco was trying to tell Harry and I'm French-speaking... Fortunately, you put the translation a bit further in ur fanfic... So, I know you will probably not change it but what Draco said should be: "Merci de m'avoir laissé la chance de rêver qu'on pourrait être ensemble pour toujours. Je t'aime, même si tu ne m'aimeras jamais. Désormais, je ne laisserai plus mon rêve t'embêter. Prends soin de toi, Harry. Je t'aimerai pour toujours!" FYI...DO NOT use an online dictionnary to translate from English to French...it really makes no sense! Because the words are not in the correct order and "you" is not "vous" in French...it's "tu"...If you say "vous" it feels like you're talking to an older person...and we don't want that! Anywayz...you probably don't care, but I couldn't let it go! Bye bye!
Carmen 2002-11-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseBeautiful...just plain beautiful...so I note the ? at the end, please do consider writing a squel, I would love to read it. And Ri-sama? Please check your grammar more throughly next time.
Mina-chan 2002-11-10 ch 1, anon.	abusesob this is so~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ GOOD! I want more please please do not end it like thisSniff sad how can you do this you're one cruel cruel authorSniff
B-BBlue 2002-11-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseWAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~ THis is so SAD ANd it made me...sniffSob (grab a box of tissue) You have to continue this youjust can't leave it angst(althought it was still very good that way) I really perfer happy ending- oh for goodness sake please tell me you're going to write more.
LightFaerie 2002-11-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat is so sad! Is it the end? does draco escape?
Kittygirl 2002-11-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseAWWWW~ This is so sad~ please don't stop and contiue this story. Personally I really like it and it made me cried_ And I was looking for a good cry anyway.
clariese moon 2002-11-01 ch 1, anon.	abusesniiffle......COOL
Shuori 2002-11-01 ch 1,	abuseCcat? I'm a slytherin if you're wondering^_~ by the way I was major depress when I wrote this and I had no idea what I'm doing so please forgive me if this sick and the grammar was all screw^_^;; Yes the "?" at the end...I really don't know if I'm going to continue this or not although the thought is really tempting...I'll think about it... Thanks for your reviews everyone!bow
Kelly 2002-11-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseEnd? Are you nuts?! Really, if you don't continue this wonderful piece I'll cry. I'm on the verge of doing so right now. You just can't leave Harry with a broken heart, he'll die without Dray. And you just have to find a way to bring poor, beautiful Draco back. Please?
CCat 2002-11-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseCliffies I really hate/love your cliffies at the same time~_~ I know I'm weird but hey can blame me for liking your stories could I? Really Shuo I never know you're into Harry Potter? I'm Ravenclaw(sorted by the HAT at the HP official Website) What house are you?
Marian of the Faeries 2002-10-31 ch 1,	abuseWhat a cliffhanger! More, please! I really like this, just a couple of comments. If you want your readers to fully appreciate what you write, make sure it's spell checked and has correct grammar before you post it. It makes a huge difference. There's not many mistakes, it wouldn't be much work. And the other thing; if Harry couldn't speak Italian, how come he remembered every word of it? That's not very credible, is it? It would have been better if Draco had left a note or something.
Elizabeth Valentine 2002-10-31 ch 1,	abuseThat was so sad. This is a serious review, for once. I don't often do serious reviews, so feel privalleged! I would like it if you continued, but it doesn't really need it. You could leave it at that if you so wished, but my friend here is complaining about it ^__^* She thinks that you should continue. She hates cliffies and is currently cursing loudly. Anyways, it's really good and really sad so...yeah. Not many stories do this to me.
duzntgivafuck 2002-10-31 ch 1,	abuseThis is so sad!!! I love the story... I think it's best to leave it angst but I'll recieve the next chapter with open arms!!!
MaoMaoLing 2002-10-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseLEAVE POOR DRAY ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND BRING HIM BACK AT ONCE!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AN ORDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND MOST OF ALL I WANT A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN NOT END IT LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS MADNESS I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

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