Sad that we didnt put up more of a fight. Theres a lot of dirty tricks you can pull but in the end we still would have lost...

mm, I like the writing, but hate crystal tokyo... I still like this tho!

You know, we got off on an entirely wrong foot. _; Today, I was feeling guilty for writing that stuff in the feedback-space for your story, when I should have used your e-mail. So, I thought I'll amend myself since you were nothing but polite to me personally, and I appreciate that. Because I don't read much in Pokemon fandom, and since I've been itching to go back and read some Sailormoon again (it's been a while) I picked this story to read.

It's very nice.

'Nice' not in the sense of 'mild indifference', but in the sense that it left me feeling good, that the characters were IC (let's not argue about it this time! _) and that the whole story, including the conclusion, stayed in harmony with the timeline.

I enjoyed reading it because of all this, and because of the thought I know went into creating this story.

I like how you made the enemies think of their own actions as liberating. It takes a great deal of work (thought) to pull off a feasible antagonist that does terrible things, but considers himself right in his head. This sort of thing is only possible when the reader can emphasize with the villain to a certain extend - and I could. Through your writing, I could understand not being willing to submit to Serenity's order even though I know Usagi would always care about everyone else before herself.

So in any case, the story was a good read, and I'm happy I did read it.

I sort of I hope I made up for my previous review which said nothing about your stories and for the comments which I think came off sounding a lot more insulting than I meant them to be when I wrote them. In the end, I just wish people explained their reasoning behind critique more, because the author's feelings are so easily hurt.

*shivers* Oooooh, this was just too good for words! Just...just...splendid! I've found this quite inspiring... If any story comes from this inspiration, don't worry, you'll get credit. Ja!

An excelent work, i must say in spite of my Hate for crystal Tokyo and everything, it stand for.

A world free of war, pain famine, etc...

Indeed but a world free of opposition or the right to disagree with the gouvernement. In my opinion, an enlightened Tyran is still a tyran.

As for Nemesis and the black Moon family, if i remember correctly, they were the descendant of the rebels who were exhiled to the 10th planet of the solar system by a certain caring, all loving and mercyful queen. You know Nemesis, the worst planet in the system solar. It remind me something from the good old USSR, a planetary Goulag.

Sorry for exposing my opinion like this concerning the Crystal Millenium. It's a great work.

Interesting stuff. Good Work Ben.

BenRG. WOW. You've done it again! Man. you should have written a sailor moon fic a long time ago! Hehehe... I can't believe A secret no more is suspended for good.

This is another one of your really great fanfiction. You always manage to convey the essence of Sailor Moon through your fanfiction. Plus, your fanfiction always have the extra information necessary to complete the story. For example, it was really cool how you managed to describe the formations and the attacks, and the different weapons used. This was great!