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Lily Elizabeth Snape
2006-10-08 . chapter 1
Crazy! Love it!
ura-hd
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
Love these series!
Zig's-girl235
2004-03-23 . chapter 1
wut the hell?!? why the hell is this in the Holes section? ugh...
bet
2003-04-23 . chapter 2
Would you please get on with the story. It is driving me nuts wondering which of the many possible directions you will take this.
Vici0usRebL
2003-04-22 . chapter 1
countine plzz...

its good...but it would be awesome if you would continue..
Coo
2003-04-14 . chapter 1
I like it. It's nice to see something short and offbeat. I tend to read all your stories more than once, and sometimes I wish they were longer, that you'd gone further with them. But most of the time I realize they are practically perfect as is. And some of the more interesting plots and ideas I've seen here.
Max
2003-02-04 . chapter 1
Hey, great story! I'm glad you didn't just leave Harry in a cell to die!
Cinnamon
2003-01-22 . chapter 1
Hey! You reviewed my story Beneath You so I came to read some of your stuff and I really like this one. It's dark and the end, though I'm happy Harry got out of the cell, now he's goign to be played with by Draco, the knew dark lord? Very ominous, not sure if I'm all that happy for him! I would rather Draco confessed his love and and... well... I'm a closet fluff fan, what can I say, hehe.

Anyway, I really like this!
StillWater
2002-11-21 . chapter 1
oooo loved it, *sniff*. I usually don't like evil draco, but this was goood.
Kenna Hijja
2002-10-31 . chapter 1
Very nice! That was an impressively angsty piece, one that, in my very humble opinion, practically asks to be continued.

But yes, leaving it with Harry would have been effective too, if a little anticlimatic. I'll never figure out why characters would obsess about dying a virgin (which is such a terribly minor drawback compared to dying...), but it seems important ;-)

I enjoyed this very much.
Anne Phoenix
2002-10-31 . chapter 1
Ohhh, nice twist at the end there - don't expect anything constructive from me because its 9Am... suffises to say I liked it a lot... and hope you will continue -- lots of hope shining through the despair!
PissedOffEskimo
2002-10-30 . chapter 1
So... does that mean no more???!!! People can be so cruel to each other.
ILLK
2002-10-30 . chapter 1
You asked me for my opinion so here goes:

Depressive, much? Were you in a dark mood? I remember being in a sort of sad moment when I wrote Now and Again but it wasn't that bad that I would write something like this... If you wanted something dark, congrats. You've fully succeed.

I found the ending very believable, though it did surprise me knowing how much you love those happy endings... Personally, I like to forget that Draco could be so harsh but I know he can be... It did surprise me that they were only 17. They had a muturity that is not found in many 17 year olds, even ones who've grown up before their time.

Harry's monologue was nice though personally I think he's lost it. What I couldn't understand was the virgin and the my lover betrayed me parts. So has Harry or Draco consumated their relationship or not?

Altogether, a good story. :o)
araocl
2002-10-30 . chapter 1
I hope you don't continue this. You might then try to redeem Draco, when he is obviously a psychopath, an irredeemable evil. It does well as a one-shot.
Psikocat
2002-10-30 . chapter 1
More more more!Pweeeeze?
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