This fic was pretty good. The one error I noticed was that Tom called his mother 'mom'. He would not have done this because 'mom' is an american word and the Harry Potter series is set in Britain, so he would have called his mother 'mum' not 'mom'. Other than that, however, this fic was well written, and was very good for a first fic in a certain fandom. Keep up the good work.

Awesome story!

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well you know I've read this already but I still think it's great great! Mrow, Tom Riddle's hot! keke..

That was really great! I loved it.
It is so well written and believable, I hope you put up more stories soon ^___^

If I read anymore fics like this I'll probably become just as obsessed with Tom Riddle as you are, my friend. And that's not a good thing--I've read all the books so far, dangit, and already I'm FREAKIN' OUT over the fact that the fifth one isn't out yet. ANYway--you're so brave! I could never walk into this fandom. It's just so big...but I'm done with sucking up now. ^_~ Just to let you know, I like how you described Tom in this. It makes a lot of sense, actually... And how you write just makes everything so very much worth while... GIMME SOMA YER SKILLZ! XD