MEE HEE HE! I *always* luv your stuff! Whee! Luv it! Luv it! Luv it!

I love this fic! Folken is my favorite Escaflowne character. I hope you update soon! You're such a good writer!

Yo! This is the best chapter you've written yet! Yahoo! (I'm afraid I haven't quite finished, I've got to write three book reports in two days!) I saw no errors of any kind, and it was so splendidly written! (You were either wide awake or on coffee, right?) I almost got teary! Folkie and Willie's wedding! * cute * "Ahem!" Ok, I'm back to normal now. Keep going! This is so cool!

hey this is a pretty good story, you're a very talented writer and you should keep writing more stories ... cuz the more the better ;) im not really big on folken fics, but this one is really good, so keep up the good work

-Neon

Finally, a Folkie fic! I love these! :)

Wow. This fic certainly has changed since your first version you had up. Very cool. So is it illegal to throw rice anymore? I heard rumors about that.

Hm, Celest. Is she supposed to be an Earthling counterpart to Celena on Gaea? 'Cause I don't think she would have died on Gaea and be reborn. What an interesting coincidence.

Anyways, I'm glad you updated! And I'll be waiting for more! (Just as you and everybody else has to wait for my updates, I'm so horrible! LOL!)

Oh Kae this is so romantic I love it. I feel so bad for Willow she almost reminds me of me and I JUST LOVE FOLKIE! Damn this fic always causes me to love him more. Keep up the great work and I hope that this story will still have the church scene in it. That was so cool in the first version. I could so see Folken doing that.

Aw! Very cute! I loved it! It was so sad and happy and it made me cry! The best! Great chapter and I love this story! It's so da bomb! (geez I've been hanging out too long with my cusin... -_-) Great chapter and I loved it!

The Shadow That Take Form as a Kat

ShadowKat

Halo! Just thought I should check on your fic and see if you've stuck up another chapter, and you have! YAY!

It feels like you have added a lot, but I can't tell since I don't have your original version to compare with. You're doing a good job, but I felt a bit weird reading Willow sing that song, it took me a few lines to figure what song it was. When I listen to songs I find it difficult to understand the words because they melt into themselves or something.

Isn't "stream of consciousness" everything you're thinking? This is what it's literally like for me 'I am typing this sentence oops! made an error delete delete delete, the frame is blue I wonder why it's black and white it's interesting how buttons the keys feel when I type clicking yay..' and so on.

Anyways, great stuff and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

hey babe, i like your story, the concept is great. However, you asked for constructive comments, so i thought i'd offer my opinion. Personally, i think Folken and Willow both spend too much time telling each other how unworthy they are. (Unworthy...may be a good chapter title:) A person can only take so much guilt, ya know? I say this from experience. I had a boyfriend who had a child with an ex. Every day he would tell me how wonderful i was, how special i was, how innocent i was, how i was perfect and i didn't deserve him, etc. It got to be annoying after a while. No joke, haha. You wouldn't think that all the compliments/neediness would be irritating but after two months i would kiss him just so he'd shut up, hahaha. (needless to say i broke up with him, lol. It just didn't work out) Anyway, just thought i'd share my opinion. please keep writing:)

Yay! Yay! This is so incredibly awesome! It's wonderful! I totally love it! It's the best! I wonder how many times I can say that before I burst? Ah, none! Wait, that didn't make sense... maybe it's, "Ah, a billion!" Or something... anyway... yeah... GREAT WORK! It was amazing! This is the best thing I've ever read! You're the best!

ShadowKat

**claps** YAY! Wonderful work! I've read this about a third of the way through before I was kicked off. Now I can finally review! I loved it! This is better then mine! It's so magnificent! You spent a lot of blood, sweat, and hard work to get it this good (or so I guess... we all know you just whip this stuff up)! Wonderful work!

ShadowKat

Very good chapter! This is amazing! I tried to read it before it was revised but this is even better! I love it! I like all the scenes! How kawaii! You've got the best talent for this sort of thing! This is one of my favorites! YAY! Good work and and the chapter title is mispelled-it's "Godd" instead of "Good". Other then that it was wonderful!

ShadowKat

**fusses at computer** I got to chapter 5 and it wouldn't let me review from chaps 3-5! Kept saying "Proxy error" and all. Stupid thing. Anyway, great chapter! It's so Kawaii! Folken's all HUGS and HUGS with Willow! I love it! Very good work! I know that this probably doesn't make sense but my friend woke me up too early this morning with her "urgent" phone call. p I don't need to wonder what she's going to wear at 7 in the morning on a holiday. Anyway, enough yapping, great work!

ShadowKat

Wow you weren't kidding, this chapter had a lot of new things added to it. It was awesome.

*sniffle* I always feel bad though, when I read bout the abortion, poor Willow.

The chapter was wonderful Kae, all the new stuff just made it better. Keep up the great work, I hope you update again soon. _