this is really a good fic and i'm very sad to know that it will be discontinued. well, i understand the condition you are in and i sincerely hope that everything goes well with you :D thank you for sharing this story to us and even though this fic will not continue ,i will still consider this as one of the best rk fics i've read...Good luck to you then and thank you again for this wonderful fic...:)

good fic

I hope this story continues and you are doing well. It is one of the few stories I can read over and over and not be bored with, and it isn't even completed. :)

Okay now, this is a marvellous story and all but enough is enough. It's been going on for four years now and hasn't been updated in nearly a year. Mou! I don't think it's fair you keep us in suspense like this and I want Kenshin to save Kenji. (wails pathetically)

Anyway, it's a fantastic story and you write very well. There are so many OCs and I miss the original cast but I'm learning to enjoy the new ones. I just wish some of the characters of old would show up to provide inspiration or something.

I am enjoying this very much and I hate to say it but I'm begging you to finish it. At least to update on a monthly basis anyway.

Ja na! Keep up the awesome work!

Love Randa*

Ah finally! I was beginning to think Saito and Sano would never show up and just where the hell is Kenshin!

Sorry - can you tell I've been looking forward to finding out what's going on. I feel sorry for Kenji; rightfully the poor little guy should have stayed dead or at least not been killed in the first place.

(sigh) Onto the next chapter!

Love Randa*

I demand an update! -shakes fists- DO Et.

Wah... Poor Aoshi...

My main wishes for this story: find out if Kenshin's still alive/where he is, have Shiroi and Kenji "kick it up a notch", understand why Misao was killed and make Aoshi snap out of it, and finally friggin' kill all those villains for doing what they did!

*sighs* Kenji's so dense! Shiroi too! I wish they could confront each other about their relationship or something. Sometimes I keep turning over ideas in my head about how they would do that... I can't shake it out of my system. ^^;; They're just so right, there's really no other way to say it. If you ask me, I'd rule out Chizuru/Kenji from the movie and smack in Shiroi/Kenji if I directed the film. Some people out there would strangle me for destroying the repeat couple (doesn't Chizuru look way too alike Kaoru?). But you, your fans, and I would all be quite happy!

It's been so long since I've read this story that I'm having trouble remembering some characters and parts of the plot... :( But your writing never ceases to amaze me! Good luck! I can't wait to read more. ;3

Well done! It's worth of waiting you to update this fiction. I really enjoyed to read this chapter. There are many SxM interactions in next chapter. I liked the way you described both of Megumi and Sanos' character. Pls wrote more SxM interactions. Thank you very much.

Oh my, you've come back! I had to backpedal a few chapters, but I'm glad I took the time--I do enjoy this story, very much. You must be pleased with how it has turned out! I know I would be. The entire world and storyline is if anything intelligently creative (and I think it's a whole lot more as well). I hope you update soon, and I'll definately be watching because you're now on my fav author's lists. Keep up the good work darling!

Alright, here I am again. It is getting rather ridiculous how many times I'm reviewing, but when I reviewed you before I didn't read your response to my response and then your other response. Confusing? Lol. Well my answer to your question that sure, I'd like to talk to you. I'm actually quite flattered at how you like me! Don't worry, my feelings aren't 'far from the same' as you put it. After I've seen how you're really like, you're not half bad.

Alright, I admit I was just teasing you there. I like you, you seem nice and someone I can get along with. As for your comment about when people come off as inexperienced and unintelligent and you feel like putting them in their place, I completely agree. Although I often do not take action in it and instead gently prod them so that atleast they appear not to be so dim-witted, I realize that is how you felt with me. I am feeling particularly foolish now ;p.

Ok so I know you're online right now, I'll go on MSN you can just add me, since your email didn't show up for some reason. Isn't it weird how we met? I flamed you (I'll admit that), and now we're talking. Lol, ok sorry, that was one of my random observations I sometimes get. Pay no heed.

Hey again. Ok, sorry to bother you again. *grins sheepishly* Um I didn't read your apology email yet when I reviewed before to apologize, so yes, I am glad I did say sorry, but I'm happier now. Thankyou so much for that last email, although you really didn't need to apologize. True, your other emails were kind of rude and made me feel bad, but then again I was as well. I'm sure I made you feel bad too, so once again I'm sorry. But I'm glad you apologized...I dunno, it makes you seem more like an actual person to me. Well...er...yes, yes I know how that sounded like, it didn't make sense, but you probably know what I mean. So sorry and thankyou again!!

I apologize for my 'lackluster' reviews. Reading over them now, I realize I was quite rude and I probably deserve the harsh response I got from it. I didn't mean to offend you in any way, maybe I was just in a bad mood. I do apologize for being very rude. But, please take into consideration this. This is a website in which you are posting this story up in, and I for one know that many people do not bother to post up reviews or if they do they are severely lacking. I actually think I take more time in typing atleast something up than most people do. If I were to write a serious review, I would, but I do not have the time for it and neither am I in school. I have to do enough homework as it is without having more by my own will, lol. It's not that I don't take your story seriously, but I'm just pointing a fact out. I am sure if you were to publish your story professionally obviously you would not get small reviews that don't pick out every detail of your story. But, as it is, a lot of people may not feel as if they should do that, and so they just leave a small comment behind. I'm sorry for being unprofessional, but I guess that a lot of people aren't. There's a lot of 'plz update soon's so, yeah.

However you're right, I shouldn't have said bluntly that your sense of humor wasn't funny. That's just my oppinion, someone else may think otherwise. I apologize once again. I was just trying to help you, but as I said before, I was probably not feeling so great that day and it came out as stark criticism. As for my 'you have great potential' comment, I didn't mean that to offend you or make you seem below me, or even anything like that. I just meant to say that there IS something to your writing that's worth taking a second glance. It's like an 'it' thing. And I meant to say that with some work at the rough edges, you could be a really, really great author. Now I won't point out specifics because I am not going to attempt to critique your story again, in case you get offended. Also, yes, I do understand the overall plot of your story and where it is going, I am not a moron (lol). I meant to say, now that I am giving more thought into my review and I'm in my normal frame of mind, that sometimes when a scene is going one way, for example some important news is about to break out, it veers another way. Like, maybe the characters get distracted by a trivial thing and it continues on about that thing, but, I'm wondering, what happened to where this scene was going? Or, another case is when the scene cuts off short. And that's what I meant about piecing together, if you understand what I mean. Please don't take this offensively, once again, because I am only stating my oppinion and I am trying to be formal about it. Or, atleast mostly, because I do feel things as I am writing this that I want to show, hence the lol's and any other words that may come up. I am also not paying attention to proper format with an introduction, subtopics, transitional sentences etc., or my contractions but I'm sure you can excuse me for that, right? *grin*

So, um, yeah, I hope you understand me now because I honestly feel bad and I understand how you're feeling. And, now I hope that you don't think I'm an imbecile now. I just didn't put much thought into anything I did that day, and I very rarely give pages and pages of in-depth response. But I do think I write more than most people care to write. In my schoolwork, I assure you, I put everything I have into it. Actually English (and the three subtopics in it) is one of my best subjects.

Ok, one more thing. I'd like to say I do respect you as an author and I hope that you'll have the consideration to respond to this. I now see how dedicated to your work you are, and that's a good thing. I'll repeat what I said before, your story is, honestly, very creative. Imaginative. And that's what I like most about it.

Your humor is not funny either...um. It's rather random and it takes away from the appeal of the story. You have potential though.

You need some work on this story. It's all over the place and also hard to follow...the ideas seem very random and you do not explain things properly so I can't really follow anything. I have to piece things together myself. The general idea/plot of the story is very good, VERY creative and that is the only thing that's keeping me reading this story.