Well... this is more interesting and more cooler!

The fighting was very good and it was cool about the knife killer. Well I think this the best chapter I ever read!The result is 100% excellent(don't count in grammars and spelling mistakes)

This is my motto that I always write starting from now:-
It nice to have friends right? The trouble is that in the future we might be separate forever but I wish this wouldn't be true!

Do I have to review...??

Well, all I can say is that this story was quite boring(Please don't kill me if you ANGRY about this result)

The writer was in control of the author
Hah, not me! If she want IT, I will do it!
Muahahahahahahahaha! I will give this story an excellent result for my mistress!

Ten minutes later...The effect wear off
Huh? What am I doing here? Hey what did I said wasn't true!!The real result was good(no, I'm not in her control, this is my own decision)

OMG!

My, Isn't this chapter a bit embarassing?
Never mind, once again the chapter is a BIT MORE short and again(yes, I'm repeating again) the story was ACTUALLY good including THE EMBARASSING PART.

Man! What the HELL did you wrote about THAT part(Oh, come on you KNOW that part!)? You thought we guys freak, thinking of that lesbian thing!? DAMN, S*, F* (please use your imagination)

Alright, for that\this matter I should run away from the author if she SEE this.Well the story was ACTUALLY good(yeah,including THE FREAKY PART TOO)

Hm...
Isn't it a bit short with this chapter??

Overall result:- 82% Good 18% bad(okay, not so bad)

Well...
Well...
It kinda hard to say...
Well, It was cool maybe quite interesting.
...
...
Alright, It was DAMN good.(I didn't check any spelling mistakes)

well it is very good story and i like the humor

Geez...dates are scary! Worse than the battle or the war, perhaps?


Thanks for the greeting!

Enjoy.

Overall rating: 11/10!!

Yeah! It over! (not that I hate it, but you wrapped it all up...sorry, that came out wrong...)
Now Corran wait "patiently" for the sequal.

Argg! Memory loss! That's almost as bad as the end of the first Pokemon movie... (how many are there again? 5? 10? 15? 20? Not that I'm counting) But WHY DON'T THEY REMEMBER? Sadness...

Is this going to be like the never-ending story or something? One that continues past your lifetime and forces your kids to do it or something? :P

Dae: We should hope not...That would be weird...And pointless.

I was trying to make a joke!

Dae: Yeah...'Trying.'

*Getting angry* Anyway, wonderful chapter! I hope you write more! Daemon needs to admit it at some point he likes the story. I'll try to get him to do it! Bye bye! See you in something I write, something you write or via I-M! ^_^

PS: Bring weapons...Daemon still has the Viral Army at his will... O_o

It's over? Aw! It's cool that Alara came back, but it was sad that Rouge had to go as well as those light-encased digimon... Anyway, great story, FlameSheRuby! I can't wait to see what else is in store from this great author!

Bee: *hears loud crash in background* ^-^;; That wasn't a good sound.

*Trunks looks black as he comes out*

Bee: Defintly wasn't a good sound.

Trunks: *hacks* That's the last time we try and use one of mother's untested machines.

Iniora: *comes out looking blacker than Trunks* I think I'm gonna colapse right after I say that this has been yet another great chappter. *colapses into unconciousness*

Lena: Oh great! Janus, get her up to bed while I close the curtain!

*Janus does as ordered while Lena pulls the curtian down, ending the review.*

(sniffles) Sadness. Sorry I haven't reveiwed...(scratches back of head) Been kinda busy. SPUR OF THE MOMENT DANCE REHERSALS ARE AS EVIL AS WRITER'S BLOCK! Anyway, in case you still care, after all this time, I've finally updated, even though it is very tiny.

And you may have adopted Jet, but I've got a bit of him, too! He's one of my white-haired boys. (along with Bakura and Inuyasha; my red-haired boys are a different story) Ha ha ha! I got TWO Inuyasha DVDs for my birthday! (does happy dance)

And... (takes a deep breath from all the talking) Funniness. Was talking and realized how much it sounded like jibberish to outsiders. (They should warn people when its B/K. B/K is okay, but K/K is better...) mass chaos and confusion.

Now I'm done. Sorry, its just rainy, and that makes me hyper!

Sad stories rule! I like them a lot! Poor Sorcerimon! :*( Good work!