Reviews for The CSI's of the Round Table

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anonimis 2005-11-30 ch 2, anon.	abusethis is realy good so far.Very funny.I whanted to let you know sence I live in Las Vegas a plase that prity far away is Phrump it a bout a hour drive from the strip.
future cop 2005-11-26 ch 3,	abusegood start cant wait for more
Beckaboo56 2005-05-04 ch 2,	abuseThis is a very creative idea. I only have to suggestions. First, don't put commentary in the middle of the story, as it takes away from the dramatic effect. Secondly, some of your comments about Americans and explaining things, such as "beating around the bush," can become offensive. We do know what that phrase means and don't appreciate being talked down to. Thanks for considering this. As I said before, I did enjoy the creativity of this piece and hope you continue to hone your craft. Keep up the work.
duckyv91 2004-12-05 ch 3,	abusei think it's really good so far. i love arthurian legend and csi so you csn expect me to check back in. if you do not finish this i will go to avalon and...sorry off topic. very good
Severus-Naughty-Student 2004-08-11 ch 3,	abuseCool story. I am having alot of fun reading it. I must say that I absolutely LOVE they way you wrote Greg. He never ceases to bring a smile to my face. And my jaw hit the floor when I found out the party was at Lady Heathers . . . . interesting indeed. Oh, and I laughed when Griss said that he gave them the night off cause he didn't want to go there by himself. TOO CUTE!
P.C 2004-02-04 ch 3, anon.	abusefinish please!
Black Storm 2003-03-14 ch 2, anon.	abuseyay, something that mentions australia! i say this coz im aussie!
Ghostey 2003-02-11 ch 3,	abuseHey! Very Good! Please update soon!
Kayrah 2002-11-18 ch 3, anon.	abusemonty python is the best movie in the world...uh...good story
Raven 2002-11-17 ch 3, anon.	abuseOh yeah! Go Monty Python and the Holy Grail! I love that movie! "We are the knights who say nee! Nee! Nee!" sorry lol. love ur story keep writing!
2002-11-17 ch 1, anon.	abusewhy are you so against Catherine? The idea is good but the way you portray the cahracters is poor. Ease up on people! And stop interrupting in the middle of the story thats what the autors note is for!
Jane Doe 2002-11-17 ch 3,	abuseI have nothing against the start of your chapter, I thought it was good. But the author knows best if you know what I mean. And sometimes the shortest chapters are the most interesting. Can't wait for more! ~Jane
Sylphide 2002-11-17 ch 3,	abuseRivErStaR, Do I even have to tell you how much I absolutely loved reading this chapter and the chapter in general? The part where someone mentioned ** and Greg came running out, "I want a part in this conversation," was hilarious! It was awesome. It seemed so real... And listening to rock music whilst testing blood and DNA, etc., isn't the only thing Greg does! He dances, too, with a plastic glove on his head. It was too funny! RivErStaR, I have the sixteenth chapter up now! (Even though your FanFiction.Net was down, mine was up so I had to copy and paste the chapter to you! LOL) Did you review? I haven't checked the reviews yet because I had to stop off at the CSI realm to see if any of my absolute favorite authors (you included!) updated their totally awesome stories. Maybe you've reviewed. I hope so, totally. Everyone that did review "Lost Chapter 16: Be That As It May" seemed to like it, and you did too, on MSN, so I hope you reviewed, as I LOVE reading your reviews. Now, RivErStaR, you have to give me someone for Greg, Gris, Warrick, or Nick to open up a can on. According to us, y'know, it just ain't a fic without someone opening up a can on someone who totally deserves it, like Alex's stepfather or Ryan Douglas of my story, "Lost". Maybe someone should open up a can on the guy who killed everyone in chapter three of this amazing fic. I hope you can have chapter four up soon, I want to see what's going to happen at Lady Heather's (Lady Heather scares me to death! :O)! I'm looking forward to that surprise ending you mentioned. Besides, RivErStaR, I just love reading your fics, because you're just an amazing writer. I am so tired still, a couple of days ago I had volleyball practice and my coach made us run 25 laps. My friend has asthma and she almost had an attack from the laps --- and get this, my coach didn't even care. I hate her so much. I hope you're better! How did your 2000 word essay go? I hope well, I still have to answer those damn questions I was talking to you about. They're impossible!! Syl P.S. Talk to you soon!
Countess Twizzler 2002-11-17 ch 3,	abuseRS - Lady Heather is definitely my favorite Character!!! thanks!!!! - Peggie (Hiding under my daughter's nom de plume!)
thousand-miles 2002-11-17 ch 3,	abuseWow they're going to lady heather's place. Mmm......that would be fun for Grissom and Sara. But you know you are very mean. Tell me I just have to wait and see...Guess that's only thing i can do then. Just do me one favour please, update soon!!!!

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