| Reviews for Day's Dream |
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Psycho Tangerine 4/16/04 . chapter 1Wow, good way of getting into a character's head. I liked it. |
cobalt-blue 11/1/02 . chapter 1Second person? ***deep bows of respect*** I bow to the superior talent. I CANNOT write in second person worth sh*t and you make it look so easy. I want to see more of this. I really like the idea of Skull being a lot smarter than he seems on the show. Especially after reading Karen Davis' Blue Yonder Universe number 26 where ***shaking head*** Skull is the Red Ranger. It boggles the mind. You did great here! |
Hannah 11/1/02 . chapter 1 This is nice. It's believable, and gives Skull depth. -Masquerade |
Gamine 11/1/02 . chapter 1 Very good, especially as it's written in second person. Second person is really hard, but you did it convincingly here. |
Akasha lazy and sickish 10/31/02 . chapter 1 You do realize that this screams for a sequel, right? *Prod* I did find one teensy little mistake though..: ". . .caught like that by those clay-brains like that. . ." One of the "like that"'s needs to make itself scarce. *Light grin* Anyway. I like lots. Write more? *Puppy dog eyes* |
JYBs Princess 10/31/02 . chapter 1 This was a good idea, writing it in second person and all. I really liked it - can't wait to read more, if any more is posted! |
Dagmar fainting 10/31/02 . chapter 1 This ... is ... incredible. YOU, a MMPR fic? No Eric, no mayhem, no nothing? **Thud** (after a suitable interval for reviving, weakly, from below the desk) Me likes ... |
Angel Negra 10/31/02 . chapter 1 Too cute. Very nicely done. You scare me with how in character your writing always is. And... I'm waiting... ;) |