Very nice story so far. Please return to it.

What happened? This was going so well. I only have one complaint... Where's Selina? She played such a huge role in the first two books, it'd be a true shame if she wasn't in this fic of your's. Good job though.

This is an excellent story. It is so very Batman -- heroes, detective work, mysterious characters. I can't wait for the next installment.

This is Batman!!!!!!!!!!
I was just telling onother writer that Batman should be dark, and sinister, and bad guys should be psychotic and evil. I'm not a very good writer but i'm trying, and I just finished the Long Haloween grafic novel, and await Dark Victory.
Keep it up!! I will be a very active reader of your storys

Oooooh!! I love this story! I love how you write for Bruce and his issues of being bubbly playboy and trying to be hard in saying no to the deal. I can't wait for the next part!
keep writing!!

Another good issue, Smitty . I see you're going with the mysterious serial killer angle like Long Halloween and Dark Victory which is cool . Your scenes between Teresa Gazzo and Bruce were very well written, as was your portrayal of Dick . The part with him saying his prayers and thanking God for Batgirl was a nice touch of childish innocence .

Well Done !

Good start off. I look forward to what happends next.

Ooh, very interestering. I can't wait until the next part comes up!!

Hey Smitty,
Nice story you got going so far . As a big fan of 'The Long Halloween' and 'Dark Victory'it is cool to read someone's version of a sequel . I like that you used Green Arrow, Black Canary, Batgirl and Killer Moth . I hope this means you'll use more villians that haven't been in the 'story era' yet .ie. not just Joker, Two Face, Riddler and all the others that Jeph Loeb used . Nice cliffhanger ending as well . :)

I believe I'll do what I did for the first two of the series.
Wait a year and than some. give me a call when you produce the TPB.
auctually, giving yourself a month between, thats quite smart. I should think of such things... but um. won't.
I'd like to see you work some of Robin: Year One into this story too.

Whoa...cool beggining. So I see that this sets up what looks to be a long and intricate story. Cool! The introduction of Batgirl was consistent, although I'm not sure how old she's supposed to be, or Dick for that matter. But it's very well written...I love crime dramas! Can't wait for Thanksgiving!