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Sotek 2007-06-28 ch 9,	abuseHighly enjoyable. Interesting takes on the characters, well-written. Now if only you'd finish it, it'd be great.
Rose1948 2007-06-01 ch 9,	abuseI enjoyed this story very much and am adding it to my favorites. Hopefully, you will be able to complete it soon. Take care and thank you very much for sharing this.
Bialaska 2006-04-30 ch 9,	abuseThis is a great story and I hope to see it continued at some point. :)
Sopchoppy 2005-02-23 ch 9,	abuseI have really enjoyed your story. The charecter development is excellent. I normally don't like stories where Ranma is split at all. But you have done such a good job with the charecters that you have pulled me into it despite that prejudice. I hope that you continue to write it. Thanks sopchoppy
mikebreslau 2004-12-05 ch 9,	abuseWell written, with deep psychological insights into the personalities of the Ranma pantheon. Clearly a more meaningful effort than most fanfics. Well done. The story ends (chapt 9) without a resolution, leaving me hoping for more. Mike
dennisud 2004-02-17 ch 9,	abuseWell you sure have weaved a bunch of pltlines all intersecting on out twin Ranmas! Now other than what I would call "Too Much Wordiness" this is a very entertaining story. What I mean by wordinessis when you explain more than necessary and add unnedded words when once is all that you need. Now I don't mean this in a negative way so please continue, but keep an eye on the word count and Most of us readers want to get to the pint more quickly than what's been done so far. But Hey we ARE Fan Fic Fanatics! dennisud
dennisud 2004-02-16 ch 3,	abuseOh Boy we have the Beings from above messing with the Ranma universe? Oh well I'll take you at your word and see! dennisud
dennisud 2004-02-16 ch 2,	abuseWell I see that your taking the Send Ranma "C" in this case to another time, world, or such. Well we'll see that in the next chapter so I'l review then. dennisud
funvince 2004-01-23 ch 9,	abuseThis is amazing. I never expected such a warm response. This makes me reconsider abandoning this fic, but I'm afraid I have some projects in the works that I have to get out of the way first. But it is invigorating to know people like this story, so I will put some serious thought into continuing. Materia-Blade, thank you for the great compliment as that made my day and as for why I put Nodoka in Juuban, the only reason was because I saw other fanfic writers put her there and I just assumed they knew better than I did. Well, you know what they say about assuming... dogbertcarroll, thank you for reviewing so many individual chapters and I'm impressed at how rapidly you read through them. You comments were very nice and helpful. Zoko, Zorknot, and everyone else, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you again.
Materia-Blade 2004-01-22 ch 9,	abuseI've allready told you what I think of this fic and that remains completely the same... however... Why is Ranma's mom's house ALWAYS in Juuban? Not a big deal it just seems that every fic has Ranma's moms house in Juuban, and i'm almost certain it's not there. Well anyway, once again your fic is the greatest i've ever read and remains so. CONTINUE!
zoko 2004-01-22 ch 9, anon.	abuseRead this once one the net and I'm glad that you have not abandand this fic and updated it. Still like the way you had Ryoga still grab female ranma and still fought her. But that dosn't compare to the Hibiki curse and how it affect someone, when Ukyo took it herself to help Ryoga. Can't wait for the next update.
Zorknot 2004-01-22 ch 9,	abuseThis has grown from a somewhat cliched premise into something truly original and intriguing. The characters have a few too many "I never realized..." monologues for my taste in places, and I don't like mysterious observer deities in fiction generally, but you've managed to keep girl Ranma from going too girly and the Ukyo Ryoga bit was believable and surprising at the same time. I was worried Girl Ranma was going to turn into a mary sue but you've kept from falling into that trap too. The reality wave is a new one and I'm interested in seeing where you go with that. And you do a great job with Nodoka's skill, staying true to cannon while giving her great ability. Nice connecting her to Kuno too. A very enjoyable fic overall. Thanks for posting.
Materia-Blade 2004-01-21 ch 8,	abuseIt will be a cold day in hell when i'm even half as good a fanfiction writer as you. Amazing. Simply Amazing. I could only dream of writing anything near this. You should seriously consider profesional writing. This story is the greatest story I've ever read to date. I've read very close to five thousand now. I don't know if that gives me bragging rights and i don't personally think it does. But if it does then take pride in it. It's to late at night to finish it right now but i will definantly finish it soon. There is only one fic I've ever read that is in even close comparison. Your rating 1 outta ten? Ten being the best? Like 60! Magnificent fic! Continue! Good God Continue!
dogbertcarroll 2004-01-21 ch 9,	abuseNice work with the Habikis. You really gave them some depth. Kuno too. You see to have a knack for it.
dogbertcarroll 2004-01-21 ch 8,	abuse"Ono, don't look so surprised. Surely you've seen a ghost before or at least watched the original Star Wars trilogy?" Nice interaction between Kuno and Nodoka. Interesting interview with a vampire. Very workable structure for them too. You've twisted Akane around a bit. Her thoughts and actions don't match at all. He raised his eyes toward the ceiling and asked, "You know Ryouga's favorite saying?" Akane frowned. "You mean Ranma prepare to die!" LOL. Great line! "He's awake! Run for your lives!" Great scene with Kasumi! Nice work with Kodachi. In the land of the weird the king would probably be a drag queen. Ranma? grin Interesting ending.

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