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anonymous 2007-11-10 ch 1, anon.	abusegood story just not a fan of c/g or b/a i too much of an a/c shipper although c/s i can do but as i said if you don't mind b/a or c/g it is a good fic
Peligro 2005-11-25 ch 7,	abusebesides the whole cordy+giles thing(wich in my point of view was very...ew) this was a very good story...1 of my favorites!
clcountry 2005-02-16 ch 7,	abuseHehe. Great story. I see you wrote this a while ago, so I don't know if you're even still checking for new reviews, but I thought I'd send you one anyway and make it an even fifty. As I said, great story. A little confusing at times, sure, but really enjoyable. I loved all the odd pairings you cooked up too, although Cordy/Angel and Cordelia/Giles are my favorite. Anyway, I'm off to read your other stories now.
RacingAganistTime 2005-01-08 ch 7, anon.	abuseew Giles/Cordelia is just nasty girlfriend, it was going pretty good til' you pop up with that ** arse Giles/Cordy crap. I MEAN NASTY! I am deeply offended by that. I never like that stuttering Wanker! CordyAngel in every single dimension/universe/future/timeline/heaven/hell forever! -continues to mutter how sick some people can get*
arkiefan 2004-11-23 ch 4,	abuseI like the story. except for this last chapter, i mean giles and cordy gros... ploease make it cordy/angel again.
angel-cordy 2004-08-22 ch 7,	abuseThat was a good story. It was cute to get Giles and Cordy together. But I mostly like the Angel and Cordy better. Keep up the good writing
Jill McCormack 2004-07-19 ch 7, anon.	abuseReally liked the premise of this story. Enjoyed it so very much. Just one question...who is Niamh? and why is/was she with Spike? Jill
MBB 2004-06-21 ch 6,	abuseI love the ending, very funny :-) Oh, I also have a rough edition of the Xanders-POV-reply-fic ready. If it's ok with you that I post it, mind if I mail it to you for beta? :-)
MBB 2004-06-21 ch 5,	abusetemporarly review after 4 chapters, and reply to the Author's not at top of P5 Well, i'm not only freaked out about the C/G (Big YUK, to go with Cordy ;-) ), but C/A isn;t my faforite either, with their family vibe in the later seasons. I'm sorry, I'm just kind of picky with my ships ( :-P if you can call C/D, C/X, C/D & C/Groo picky) and I just reacently discovered C/X, that doesn;t help much either ) But still, your story is very intreging, and the whole Cordelia-with kid plot is something original, (at least I haven;t read it anywere before) and I like it. So I'll keep reading, but just in case the C/Gness makes me stop, yo already got my review: Me likes :-) [In case I finish, would you mind if I wrote a C/X reply-fic from Xanders POV to this story? because it just seem to form itself in my head while reading :-) (Kind of freaked me out at first since I usually can't write, but I'd like to try)] I do agree a little with Acacia Jules, you should have mentioned the kid's age (I presume betwen 4 and 6 since she can talk and is little, while Cordy and Angel are both tall). But I am glad you left out all those other details as eyes and hair and clothes and whatever, since it would keep up the stoory too muich (for my taste)
LittleBookOfCalm 2004-05-26 ch 7,	abuseCompletely amazin'! :):):)
Acacia Jules 2004-02-12 ch 1,	abuseONE little, VERY important thing you've forgotten to do. DISCRIBE WHAT SHE LOOKS LIKE. Yes, she's a little girl. But what does she look like?! How OLD is she? What color eyes does she have? What color hair does she have? How long is her hair, it it short? Does she have bangs? Is it straight or curly? Who's features does she embody? Does she have her mother's smile and her father's eyes? Who's personality traits and quirks does she tend to emulate? ` These are all REALLY important facts you need to give so your have a well rounded character. At LEAST give the basic facts of age, hight, hair and eye color! ` This is a GREAT start to a great fan fic, but you've left out some VERY important information, which makes it really hard to get into the fic since we can't PICTURE what Genevieve LOOKS like. ` ` Oh, one question. Wouldn't Genevieve have been confused about Cordelia's looks? Because LA Cordy has short light brown/blond hair, and Sunnydale Cordy has LONG, dark brown hair. I would think it would be quite a shock to see such a different hair style.
SlytherinGinny 2003-08-18 ch 1,	abuseYAY! Good story so far, i cant wait to keep reading, make sure to stick with the original plot unlike some authors. ^.^!
Just Wolf 2003-07-25 ch 5,	abusethis story is ** brilliant. i love and adore it. i have to keep on reading, now.
firefly/Star 2003-05-14 ch 7, anon.	abuseI love it. Mwahwah to the whole C/A goodness. Still freaked by G/C fluff, mainly cuz I think Willow/Giles is the only true ship I'm for, other than Giles/Jenny, and Giles/Olivia, as far as Giles is concerned. Wanna hook cordy up with a watcher, make it Wes next time, pls? And save my poor, deluded sanity. It was good, story following waay to quickly for poor lil' me to follow, but I got the gist of it, and re-read. And hey, my school got struck by lightening today, so I guess it\s allowed for me to be a wee bit hyper, particularly as I was in the DAMN BUILDING!! Calming down...yep, tis good. Already read HARI, (cool, name of my best mate! lol) (I'm really, way too hyper) so, not gonna do that , but yeah, xcellent. Well done Adele
Illyria04 2003-05-09 ch 7,	abusevery kool luved the C/G part-so funny !

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