Seems promising!

i initially didnt want to read this as i'm not too keen on new characters being introduced to a main plotline, but this works very well. i love it :-D please continue!

This is wonderful! I love it a lot. You really should continue it, it would be worth it.

passable? what does that mean? and who is it? you leave too many questions unanswered!

This is good. It's wll written and leaves a lot of questions - always a plus. Sark seems nicely in character (what we know of him anyway). When is it set? Before or after "The Enamy Walks In"? It might be an idea to say in the description where you have spoilers up to as this will influence what people read. Personly I can't read if it has season 2 as I've not seen any and don't want it ruined...Anyway, this is very good, I'd like to read more.

Harriet

It sounds interesting... I'd like to read more.

This sounds interesting, would like to see where you're going to take it.

Mooooooooooooooore! More more more more!

Pretty please? :)

I think you've got a nice concept here and you have a good opening. Nice job on Sark :) You really should continue this.