i read most of your story (then got bored and left it), it was kinda weird. y could he not just wish his arm back with the dragon ball.

Very very good story. It is also really touching. You have a good talent for writing. I hope you continue. I could not find anything wrong with this story. It was very well thought up. It must have taken almost a year to make. I'm sorry but I canot find anything to say but this is one of the better stories out there. Good bye.
Jon

*sniffles* awwww I actually cried a few tears during Chi Chi's death scene. It was handled very well.

Yay!*gives ani a thousand chocolate chip cookies*

great story!

so sweet a very well written story so far dealing with guilt and other inner feelings, keep it up. ;o)

very kawii! ;o)

very sweet, ppor Gohan, he's already gone through so much...

So Gogan is beging stubborn, but then what else do expect from a sayian? Love it! ;o)

very sweet, IT's about time they got together. ;o)

hmmmm, why do tehy both deny it so much. It would probably be better fore both if they'd just get together.

I love it. On to the next part.

I LIke. But still, What about the egg?

I love it, but what about the egg?

Very interesting...