this story is good, but it would be much better finished.

WHY HAVE ALL THESE AWESOME FICS OF YOURS NEVER BEEN UPDATED?!

Nice story so far, i hope you start working on it again, i really wanna know what happens next ^_^. and i loved the genma bashing you did it was a very very nice touch

Great Story!!

What you've written so far is pretty good except for the last chapter. Unfortunately, it seems that you've had Ranma replace BOTH Ryoko AND Tenchi.

What makes "Tenchi Muyo" so great is the way the main characters interact with each other and the competition between the girls over Tenchi. I would have liked it better if you hadn't changed the way things went in TM so much. The fight/chase between Ryoko and Tenchi in the first episode of TM was GREAT! I really enjoyed all the TM episodes, even the new ones.

Would it kill a Ranma fan to deal well with the character called Tenchi Masaki without turning Ranma into him? Tenchi didn't need any help from Ranma in the OVA to deal with any threats and he shouldn't need any help from Ranma in this story. And what about the REAL Ryoko? The way she developed feelings for Tenchi while watching him grow up was an important part of her character development. Things could get quite interesting if she showed up.

BTW, Aeka may have a temper and Ryoko has a worse one, but they rarely take their frustrations out on Tenchi. They'd be more likely to join forces to clobber anyone who tried to hurt Tenchi.

Excellent story. Maybe there'll even be more one day. And I'm glad you haven't planned a Ranma/Akane pairing here.

I have no real qualm about this story, other than that I don’t really like it. It just isn’t a writing style that I can really sink my teeth into. I mean no offence by this; it just doesn’t suit my taste. Ciao

It is sad that you have given up on this story. Maybe one day you will write on and I will be there to read it.

pitty this fic looks dead. its pretty good

What a interesting " Ranma gets another type of curse" type of fics, well blended with the Tenchi universe.
Ranma with Ryoko's body and powers? Interesting indeed...
Sadly, seems that the fic is dead.

You should really update this fic. Its really good.

Hm...looks good...but I'm wondering if you are continuing this story or if you've forgotten about it.

Keep writing!

Well done.

Look forward to seeing what happens when Washu arrives.

excellent

*stifles a maddening giggle* Hehe, that's just brilliant.

But I was wondering, and this goes since this hasn't seen an update since 2002, I was wondering if you wouldn't mind me using the scene between Yosho and Ryoko at Jusenkyo. I've got an idea and it involves there being a spring of Ryoko (I keep on typing Ryoga! >.