Just read it through and loved it.

my only issue is when people write like this: "after breakfast, they walked around the town a bit more, and then went home to change. After that, they went over to Sookie’s."

aghh! so annoying. bad writers do this!

DON"T TELL US and gloss over everything. SHOW US. if you're just gonna quick list things then theyre not worth say at all.

otherwise not a bad job.

absolutly fantabulous and superbly amazing and super mushy..gotta say i loved it and enjoyed every minute of reading this...believe it or not im running out of adjectives so...thanks so much for this rockin fic!keep up the good work!

LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

oh my god!i seriously don't have words to describe how awsome that was!you and your story both rock!it had an amazing end!i enjoyed every minute of it!just keep up the good work!

Your story is so so so sso amazing! Its one of the best ones i've ever ever ever ever read! Don't ever stop writing!

This is great.

Aww shes head over heels with him

This was a great story. The different characters made it all the more irteresting and all the fighting and obstacles made it more realistic. I absolutely loved the proposal, the calendar theme was a great idea.

oh wow i like write more stories like this

IS there any chance of a sequel I loved this story

Aw that was so sweet

i luv this chapter!

i luv this chapter!

tristin's younger than rory?
very good story